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words are my life...

Postby xariuss » Nov 4th, '05, 05:07

I wan't to impress and please
but my destiny
has got me thinkin more then just in three's
There's a thrust in me
that wants more then just crust and seeds
The lusts in me
that must just be
my down fall or my dad's crushing seeds
love's rushing me
malnourished, it must just bleed
everytime i think of my fam-il-y
my tears are suicidal
i'm judged on everything that i do
what i might do,
is pray to god for some luck or a clearer sight to
a different answer than just to say that ill fight you
my words will ignite you
make you cry and happy without changing titals
god gave me a life full
of maniacs who carry around rifels
But i must get out of this life through
my words which can explain my life to..

Hmmm, hope yas like it, i just wrote it then.. 5minute work , after thinking of one of my fav eminem songs, out of his infinte album ...i'm really in a bad trend and i just need to express, hope you'se like it
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Postby xariuss » Nov 6th, '05, 09:32

Any comments at all? i don't mind if you say it's shit...
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 6th, '05, 16:32

if you ever fancy dropping it in audio just yell at me....

ARON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and ill come running to help ;) :D

nice work :flower:
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Postby xariuss » Nov 6th, '05, 23:28

sounds good ey, recording something would be the way,instead of posting lyrics can post some audio.. now that would hype these forums up
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Postby Trigger » Nov 29th, '05, 02:09

that....was.....some.....fukin.....awesome shit bud no words can explain...k im done yo but awesome yo
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Re: words are my life...

Postby Nu Syd » Nov 29th, '05, 02:13

xariuss wrote:I wan't to impress and please
but my destiny
has got me thinkin more then just in three's
There's a thrust in me
that wants more then just crust and seeds
The lusts in me
that must just be
my down fall or my dad's crushing seeds
love's rushing me
malnourished, it must just bleed
everytime i think of my fam-il-y
my tears are suicidal
i'm judged on everything that i do
what i might do,
is pray to god for some luck or a clearer sight to
a different answer than just to say that ill fight you
my words will ignite you
make you cry and happy without changing titals
god gave me a life full
of maniacs who carry around rifels
But i must get out of this life through
my words which can explain my life to..


that was fire man,stay up
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Postby xariuss » Nov 29th, '05, 13:58

thanks man
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