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KeyStyle 101

Postby JMG » May 5th, '08, 23:33

this is like a game cuz i got objectives
get my pockets pregent then cop a lexus
next is a rockin neckless im so hot electic
i could shock the present back a month
aint got a weapon i dont have to front
i just watch the redskins wrap a blunt
and lay back and chill i dont slay crack and kill
i just roll with the punches im as real as they come
call me the truth cuz i feel im the one
like the 7th seal i am done unless i checkmate death
so i know what lies at stake so i will anialate
so i can look back on my suicidal days
to say i made it through the tidal waves
and all around me sharks are swarmin
to top it off my heart is torn
but one day ull see a star is born
Last edited by JMG on May 6th, '08, 01:36, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby Emadyville » May 5th, '08, 23:43

Sick sick sick shit.

this is like a game cuz i got objectives
get my pockets pregent then cop a lexus
next is a rockin neckless im so hot electic
i could shock the present back a month
This part ^ was insane, great rhymes, loved the end of this.

so i know what lies at stake so i will anialate
so i can look back on my suicidal days
to say i made it though the tidal waves
These rhymes were sick, "lies at stake" and "anialate" nasty, "Suicidal dayss" and "tidal waves" are sick too. Ending was good, could of been better after how lyrical the rest was, but damn that was impressive.
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby JMG » May 6th, '08, 00:21

thanks bro i just smoked a bowl ,turned the beat up and lost myself!
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 6th, '08, 00:56

Damn im surprised you even know how to line up like that :unsure:

But it had some nice ones in there

Just stop bein a dick, it may just be me but each threads you post in CW is sayin something like "it sucks"
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby JMG » May 6th, '08, 01:05

haha i no its cool tho i dont got no beef with no one, i just like to fuck around.
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 6th, '08, 01:12

JMG wrote:haha i no its cool tho i dont got no beef with no one, i just like to fuck around.


Fuckin around here can get you banned easy plus it gets annoying to see the same shit posted over and over again. But anyways I wont turn this thread into an argument/beef thread good looks bro. :y:
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby Ka0t1c » May 6th, '08, 01:21

its a good piece but you have a typo: though = through just in case someone got thrown off somehow... :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby -[Zach]- » May 6th, '08, 06:53

damn man. that was straight fire for real. hot lines. real nice lyracism. very good job man :y:
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby JMG » May 14th, '08, 03:39

thanks buddy
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby Xray » May 16th, '08, 10:40

good shit but the word keystyle is retarded
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Re: KeyStyle 101

Postby Arabian Shady » May 16th, '08, 12:08

Xray wrote:good shit but the word keystyle is retarded



:y: whole heartedly agree, :p
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