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Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 10th, '08, 01:28

Lol so heres the story this guys nick name was Enis ya fo real Enis he was gonna around at aour school dissin nerds the hella white people so I jumped in for the hell of it and and said this fo real hes lyrics were wack heres some of what I said cant really remember all of it but damn it was funny as fuck.

So your names Enis? So I guess that rhymes with penis
Your anxious but when you saw me come you wint blankness
You belong on the short bus enis mind your own business
I think your growin a fetus no one care bout your fitness
My mad rhymes are fearless so take away your gayness
Makin fun of nerds your hopeless bitch ass go see jesus
Beatin me is madness I'm a menace worse then moses
I'll crush your pelvis and start sayin hocus pocus, plus
This is my practice my words are motherfuckin precious
Im sayin this for a purpose step up ya progress

Thats about it...
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 10th, '08, 01:57

good job with the multis :y:
could have somthin there
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 10th, '08, 01:58

thanks my man :y:
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Ka0t1c » May 10th, '08, 02:57

i like the style, the way you use your words is very cool :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Xray » May 10th, '08, 06:08

CrayZay :y:
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 10th, '08, 15:58

lol, thats funny. Go beat the shit outta that guy, he got no right to be dissin ppl anyways. I hate fuckin preps and jocks, they think they better than everybody else. Almost all of em are pussies anyway, wont do shit if you asked em too. for real, trust me. If u interested about how i know this, p.m. me djblue.
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Dark Blue » May 10th, '08, 17:01

good for u :y: haha that was funny to...did the other guy say anything after that?
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 10th, '08, 17:41

haha his people laughed but he didnt really say shit anyways i dont reall got nothin against him just tehfact he thinks hes all shit but its all good :y:
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 10th, '08, 19:18

Ok, well...i still think you should beat his ass. lol, bring one of those spiked bracelets to school and threaten him, thats what i'd do.
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 10th, '08, 19:41

Darkblade44431 wrote:Ok, well...i still think you should beat his ass. lol, bring one of those spiked bracelets to school and threaten him, thats what i'd do.


Naw i got nothin against him really.
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 10th, '08, 20:06

Hmm..well ok then. i just wanted him to get hurt.
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Re: Ownd this dude in a battle

Postby Dark Blue » May 10th, '08, 21:08

haha now that would have been funny
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