DISSIN NEW RAP

[Darkblade44431]

Here's what i have so far on a song that disses new rap and R'n'B. Let me know what you think.
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I'm sick of everybody fakin shit, actin like somethin they're not
Ya fake pricks cant even get a bitch, rappin like you get em hot
Say you got eight tricks and each one is a verse
Well I'm here to tell Chris Brown, in "Kiss Kiss", you're not talkin to me, you're talkin to her(ha ha)
I'm tired of hearin Crank Dat everywhere that i go
And i'm just hearin copycats, they dont even know (What's Superman that Ho?)
Damn right dumbass, imitatin songs like Crank Dat(lets make Crank Dat Batman! ha ha)
thinkin its gonna be a hit, waitin till 5 in the mornin just to hear your music
but you overuse it, then you post it on your myspace page and listen to it till you have a million plays
and that goes for anyone thats disrespectin the game
Flo Rida thinks that he compares to none and flows with sick detectin rhymes flung so high they hit the sun, but every time he gets a pen and tries to write beneath his skin he finds himself stumped once again and fails to find the passion, that he doesnt have, he has none, so he just tries to fit in with others in the game,
its no fun, when his thoughts just fly and then he stutters cuz he cant even think of a name.

[Solace]

HAHA damn that was sick gooood job. record it. you taught those crappers a lession (lame pun lol)

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks a lot. that means a lot considering my only 2 songs i've made sucked. i think this will be better. and i think i'll work on this some more today too. i'll record when i finish it.

[Solace]

cant wait to hear it

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks. me neither.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Lame you dissed soulja hes my fav artists there is way better then eminem him self that verse nearly mad me cut my wrist why the fuck would you diss soulja boy he sucks too bad to be dissed by anyone. :crying:

im sorry im buzzed

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im just playin man good write

[Solace]

HAAAHH DJBLUE. that made me laugh a lot

[Darkblade44431]

lol, thanks djblue. there are ppl who think soulja boy is better though, unfortunately. on the same level and better, i hear that. its annoying to hear. i hope i can keep my dope rhymes up with the rest of the song. i should be able to.

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks Chet. I'm glad to see that i'm getting better.

[Rain Matrix]

Good job I personally hate all those songs u dissed on...
so this was on point and fluent in rhyming

respect

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks Rain. lol, im gettin much better comments than i got with other songs. i'll probably finish writing it soon.