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Porno Star pt.2

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Porno Star pt.2

Postby Robbie G » May 14th, '08, 03:12

this is the story, of the girl in the front row
named Laurie, sure wasn't afraid to go low
squeeze it and please it for just a lil' dough
easier than Kobe taking up a free-throw
What happened to your plans to enroll in college?
Now your on the path to slide down metal poles for dollas
Your fingernails, toes and face is polished
But your brain's on freeze, In other words frozen knowledge
All your plans and your goals gone and demolished
think this shit would make your old pops proud
shaking back and forth performing for the whole crowd
hitting the sack, screaming so hard and loud
Not gonna lie though girl, I dream of you too
thinking up a scheme for what I'm a bout to do to you
pay attention when we do a fraction, 'stead of sucking an erection
tight clothes in front of me, girl your more than just a distraction

I know I took some lines from Banks...big deal... :smoking:

The format/flow is a little off...
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Re: Porno Star pt.2

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 15th, '08, 01:14

good job.
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