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Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby blitches » May 14th, '08, 21:40

i'll make it rain
not water, not money but wit the blood of the slain
theres no trust in the game
90 percent of rappers get screwed
and if you aint true, then they'll fuck you the same
so prepare for whatever, whatever the weather
lyrics tighter than leather
im high as fuck, heads light as a feather
battle you? ha, it'll be my pleasure
i'll even let you write your shit just for good measure
but once we start i wont let up
so i hope you tear it up, for your sake
fuck up once and watch your name
erase, no place for you on the stage
youre played, your days of bein on stage seems to be a waste
i hate to say, i told you so
its over ho, i told you yo
look at you now, nowhere to go
and nothin to show, so now nobody knows you
plus ya crooked label owns you
about 2 mil in debt, how you gonna pay that
your deal just turned you to a slave jack
you lost what you cant take back
meanwhile when my shit gets mentioned they screamin "play that"
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Re: Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Emadyville » May 14th, '08, 21:50

Not trying to be a dick but that wasn't hot at all
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Dark Blue » May 14th, '08, 22:13

it was alright
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby JMG » May 15th, '08, 01:39

uh nvm
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Ka0t1c » May 15th, '08, 19:35

its not hot but its got some good parts that are worth keeping
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Messin Around.................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby -[Zach]- » May 16th, '08, 05:46

i didn't think it was too bad. i liked it. some real nice creative lines in their. keep it up :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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