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OLD RAPPERS FORGOTTEN

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 15th, '08, 01:03

This is a bit different from the song of dissin new rap and r and b that i just posted a verse to recently. Its all similar i guess, but here's the verse i got for this. tell me how it is. i've got one verse so far:
EDIT: i think i'm just gonna combine both verses of the dissin new rap.
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People forgot, the old rappers with the style that's phat,
People lost their hearin senses for the good ol' rap,
Nobody remembers "bad intentions", everyone now is an act,
Not one person could change their mind, new rap is wack,
n i g g a s and w i g g a s up in soulja bitches ass,
the style's flipped up, not even boost mobile knows where its at,
No one gave Em respect for ditchin the grammys,
someone's always up in the ass of that bitch ass Webbie,
People stuntin and try to get the attention of Fiddy(fifty),
Hell Fiddy's a bitch now, i swear, him and Justin Timberlake are gonna go steady,
Go ahead bitch, shoot my ass down, I got nothin to live for now, and you're too much of a bitch to do it anyhow,
New rap's turned around, and rick ross wont even fuck that bitch on his bed, he got too many fat roles on his neck to move his head.
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Re: OLD RAPPERS FORGOTTEN

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 16th, '08, 22:04

DAMNIT, is it that bad?
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Postby Unscarred » May 16th, '08, 22:08

this was very good, i like it, and your flow was great :y:
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Re: OLD RAPPERS FORGOTTEN

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 16th, '08, 23:35

Thanks people. i think i'm gonna make it the second verse and keep the name, then put the diss of new rappers i did on the first verse. but i dont know if the flow difference would fit.
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Re: OLD RAPPERS FORGOTTEN

Postby Xray » May 17th, '08, 05:06

Darkblade44431 wrote:Thanks people. i think i'm gonna make it the second verse and keep the name, then put the diss of new rappers i did on the first verse. but i dont know if the flow difference would fit.

than make it fit :8)

good drop :b:
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Re: OLD RAPPERS FORGOTTEN

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 17th, '08, 12:35

Thanks Xray. lol, i thought no one liked it, i had 30 views and no replies.
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