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Lustin, not Lovin

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Lustin, not Lovin

Postby Ka0t1c » May 16th, '08, 04:23

i like the tone, when im boning, her moan
cuz i know that its on
we're both going in the zone
at my home im so strong
she got my pole swollen long
and full control won't be gone
i got my SoCo, body's calm
oh no im not wrong
but i want it raw
a booty call, that is all til i fall
will she claw my back with her paws
or act up n head to my draws
messin with my balls
test the alcohol
i don't stall
now im ready to cum...
im off of the wall
never soft
love hasn't evolved
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Jun 6th, '08, 19:52, edited 1 time in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Lustin, not Lovin

Postby -[Zach]- » May 16th, '08, 05:41

well that is a break from the norm...i thought it was good though. very discriptive and interesting but good nonetheless. keep it up :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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