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My Test...

Postby Ka0t1c » May 17th, '08, 20:10

take a second to listen, im makin a record, i figure my weapon does trigger a message bigger
a gift i've been blessed with to lift from my chest when im pissed is this lyricist presence
my spiritual essence appears as my destin-E steers to where im not absent from ears undeafened
by the fears, i've mastered thru years of practice my nightmare to try and hear, adapt, and act on
never step off track or go backwards, i steer to capture my passion
cuz it's best that i share all my lessons than to bury the answers
i know many care so like closed captions the curious can compare
that's no question, for a career broadcastin out clear, our tests are now near...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: My Test...

Postby Emadyville » May 17th, '08, 20:37

needs work but has def potential, good shit :y:
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Re: My Test...

Postby -[Zach]- » May 18th, '08, 02:50

damn...i thought that was fucking nice as hell. theres a certain...i don't know what...but it was hot. very lyrical for sure. very good man. keep it up :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

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