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R.I.P

Postby Robbie G » May 31st, '08, 04:44

couldn't you have relaxed and stayed home 'till the days end
Just wish you could have stuck around awhile and called me a friend
it isn't all right, we just pretend,
can't understand what we don't comprehend,
if you knew what you left behind, those who greive
a year later and still on the mind, abscence without leave
we've never met, but I feel the pain yet
when you examine the stone, realize it's not set
May 30th, the best than the worst
felt like a gift and handed a curse....

r.i.p dude... :'(

*good die young by d12 comes up on shuffle* :sweating:
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Re: R.I.P

Postby Kosovic » May 31st, '08, 18:48

Its Poetic, it doesnt have to make sense.
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Re: R.I.P

Postby Robbie G » Jun 1st, '08, 02:15

yes it does.... :sweating:


like we can't understand it because we don't fully comprehend it...eh... :whistle:
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Re: R.I.P

Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Jun 5th, '08, 21:28

its a nice piece of work, and i know where you coming from with not understanding what we cant comprhend cus like you can understand things unless you know the full story :)
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Re: R.I.P

Postby Kosovic » Jun 5th, '08, 21:32

U understodd? :S
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Re: R.I.P

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 28th, '08, 19:07

Good job, finish it up.
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Re: R.I.P

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 3rd, '08, 21:27

dank bro
nice
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Re: R.I.P

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 3rd, '08, 22:09

Greeeeeeg69 wrote:dank bro
nice

its good minus that line everybody said because they are contradicting statements
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