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NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » May 31st, '08, 23:04

If you remember awhile back I wrote "Love Fades", well here is the 2nd verse. I'm DEFFINATLY gonna be puttin' this song on my "Life Overdose" LP. This is that deep shit I always go for. Anyways, hope you get the flow to it. Let me know what ya' think please.

Verse 2:
You havn't changed a bit, you wouldn't recognize me//
So don't go lookin' to find something that you couldn't see//
I'm a happier person, I'm taking problems with ease//
Ever since you have left, 'cause you ain't bothering me//
I just continued with life, like nothing happened at all//
Forget the laughs and the calls, you are a backstabbing broad//
It's helpin' my rap and that's the only good cause//
Because the pain that I go through just goes great in these bars//
I'm drainin' my heart with every peice I create//
I just can't put it to rest, it always eats at my brain//
It's been the same since the start, and when I sleep I just wake//
You're always stuck in my head, but I hate speakin' your name//
What do you think about me? Am I as bad as they say?//
Am I the man that I was? Or have I finally changed?//
We havn't talked in awhile, I feel soo lonley some days//
The days I think about you, they just throw me out of place//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008
[Sorry Chet ;)]

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 31st, '08, 23:45

deep shit mane,,,
keep it up :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » May 31st, '08, 23:51

sticcy z wrote:deep shit mane,,,
keep it up :y:

Thanks a lot man. My bad I never replied to your messege before, I was busy as fuck, but I did check that track out and thought it was pretty sick. My bad if you thought I was duckin' you or somethin, lol.

And thanks Chet, lol. I kinda like that line in there though, it's just true shit, sayin' it straight up and raw, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 1st, '08, 03:58

Steve Spag wrote:
sticcy z wrote:deep shit mane,,,
keep it up :y:

Thanks a lot man. My bad I never replied to your messege before, I was busy as fuck, but I did check that track out and thought it was pretty sick. My bad if you thought I was duckin' you or somethin, lol.

And thanks Chet, lol. I kinda like that line in there though, it's just true shit, sayin' it straight up and raw, lol.

lol np bro..im glad you liked my shit
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Nu Syd » Jun 1st, '08, 04:24

great read man :b:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 1st, '08, 06:16

good shit minus the spelling errors!!! :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 2nd, '08, 01:27

Kaotic wrote:good shit minus the spelling errors!!! :y: :y:

Merci :)
But what spelling errors? lmao.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Boston » Jun 2nd, '08, 01:45

the concept is good fucking stuff. reminds me of something i'd do, because i like writing shit about that kind of stuff, maybe we could do something about that aha. but yeah, i can see how this could flow, or a flow i would do. i liked the ending of the verse better but good shit. keep it up.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 2nd, '08, 02:57

Boston wrote:the concept is good fucking stuff. reminds me of something i'd do, because i like writing shit about that kind of stuff, maybe we could do something about that aha. but yeah, i can see how this could flow, or a flow i would do. i liked the ending of the verse better but good shit. keep it up.

Thanks much. Yeah this is my style, just straight up deep shit coming from the heart, lol. Glad you liked it, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 2nd, '08, 04:29

Chet wrote:
Steve Spag wrote:Thanks much. Yeah this is my style, just straight up deep shit coming from the heart, lol. Glad you liked it, lol.

:confusion: Even Devil's Lettuce :confusion:

LMAO. Well I sure do love weed, lol. That'd be me stating the obvious, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Kosovic » Jun 5th, '08, 00:16

Why u call urself Steve Spag?
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 5th, '08, 01:11

Kosovic wrote:Why u call urself Steve Spag?

Because that's my name....well my last name is longer, but Spag is the first 4 letters.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Kosovic » Jun 5th, '08, 01:22

Where i live "Spag" is a thin rope......sorry.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Love Fades Pt. II (MUST READ)

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 5th, '08, 01:25

Kosovic wrote:Where i live "Spag" is a thin rope......sorry.

Well where I'm from "Spag" is a sick rapper, so it's cool, lol.
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Postby Kosovic » Jun 5th, '08, 01:28

If u so say so *still feels dissappointed*
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