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Postby Solace » Jun 7th, '08, 04:32

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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Emadyville » Jun 7th, '08, 07:21

I enjoyed it :y:
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Kosovic » Jun 7th, '08, 12:56

Too gangsta for me. :n:
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Solace » Jun 7th, '08, 22:23

@Emadyville, thanks

@Kosovic, sorry :(
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Kosovic » Jun 8th, '08, 00:27

Dont worry about it.
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Solace » Jun 8th, '08, 03:21

Was it bad like the other one, Kosovic? Or just the style of this one doesnt appeal to you?
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Kosovic » Jun 8th, '08, 21:32

What? I dunno, i dont listen to rap music.
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Emadyville » Jun 10th, '08, 22:19

Kosovic wrote:What? I dunno, i dont listen to rap music.


It's quotes like this that make me be like, wtf, and then I laugh and don't know what to think.
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Solace » Jun 11th, '08, 00:14

Yea i was just wondering...your on a rap forum and yet you dont listen to rap and yet your checking out my freestyle? O.o
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Kosovic » Jun 11th, '08, 00:16

You mean I contradict myself?
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Re: Watcha Goin Do? *Simple Freestyle*

Postby Solace » Jun 11th, '08, 00:58

i guess you could say tthat
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '08, 02:03

Okay, read the first post


Youll see why i bumped it.

PS. Im taking some lines from my old Fight Me piece.
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Requiem » Sep 14th, '08, 03:13

alright, i like the concept. there's a few flow issues, but it's pretty good man. :y: a little tweaking could find this pretty ill :8)
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '08, 03:38

IceKilla wrote:alright, i like the concept. there's a few flow issues, but it's pretty good man. :y: a little tweaking could find this pretty ill :8)

The version you sent me was ill man, but if i use that, itll pretty much be yours. I just took like 5 lines and put them in.

and i was flowing it in this specific way, so it was flowing perfect for me.
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Requiem » Sep 14th, '08, 03:41

shadymademe wrote:
IceKilla wrote:alright, i like the concept. there's a few flow issues, but it's pretty good man. :y: a little tweaking could find this pretty ill :8)

The version you sent me was ill man, but if i use that, itll pretty much be yours. I just took like 5 lines and put them in.

and i was flowing it in this specific way, so it was flowing perfect for me.


it's better, still a few extra words in some lines, but other than that it's pretty ill. u know what we should do.

u should do Cat & Mouse for ur EP, and i'll do Cat & Mouse (Ice Killa Remix) on my LP, or for ur EP too. that way, the world gets to see my version. so it's not stuck in pm land forever. :sweating:
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