Rap without HipHop

[judah]

far we are from the times hip hop was
A heart thing not a dollar shit 'cause
they spit what they spit but there's heart
So what they say, is not a source for trust
mcs spitting what people want
they do pussy they dont do vagina or cunt
cause pussy looks to be a gangsta shit
so you be game and game be the 50
who got more holes, who is the real guy
who got behind the bars, went through hell but didnt die?
is this the reason why u rap
well rap is heart and if that is ur wack rap is a crap!!!
this what hiphop is all about
realness, fitness and true word of mouth
speak to the people what is best for them
be a teacher, be a KRS on them
if u tell me Pac and Big died because of this rap shit...
(I'll say yeah, u right)
but that was rap with no HipHop on It...[/size]

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realness, fitness and true word of mouth
speak to the people what is best for them
be a teacher, be a KRS on them

best lines coz it gets the point across, good concept nice mind frame, badly executed with a dodgy flow and and "rap" standard rhymes when speeking of hip hop and rap seperate you got to make a point that the dumbed down rappers aint on your level otherwise its contradicting.

keep it up though

[Jay-19]

Good shit man! I feel the lyrics and concept of it. But it seems like the flow is a little bit off at some lines. But since it's me reading it, I can't possibly know how you flow it.

But good shit man, no doubt!