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LEAVE ME ALONE

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LEAVE ME ALONE

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 13th, '08, 20:07

I only have one verse so far, and i wasn't thinking about this when i wrote it even though its kind of a screaming song, but i was thinking it should go with the beat to "Til I collapse", and i tested it out, seemed to fit nicely, what you ppl think?
Anyway, here is the first verse of "Leave Me Alone"
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Don't even talk to me
i'm not fuckin playin
and i'm not to be fucked with in the state of mind that i'm in
i'm feelin crazy
so many racin thoughts in my head
i could choke you to death with two fingers
fallin back in
back to my crazy stage at eight
but i'm stronger than then
i guess you could say its fate
for me to commit a sin
i'm not afraid to pull your guts right outta ya skin
i'm not afraid to rip your brain right outta ya head
if my eyes start to water and it looks like i'm cryin,
bitch i'm not!, but i'm not a starter of violence,
and i'm not...fuckin around with science
if you see one tear in my eye
i'm not just denyin it
i'm mad as hell, i went to hell, took over as sire
i may be tired of this religious shit but still i take no defiance

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Re: LEAVE ME ALONE

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 14th, '08, 18:02

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Re: LEAVE ME ALONE

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 14th, '08, 21:18

lol, and thank yaz!!! and actually, i think i just wanna go with a dark beat, not "til i collapse" beat.
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