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Tried to mess wit Multies and Complex word play, i was bored

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Tried to mess wit Multies and Complex word play, i was bored

Postby blitches » Jun 19th, '08, 03:30

i need no topic
i feast on beats, rinse and repeat the beast dont stop it
half maniacal, happen to riot over
the most trivial things
outta this world like a spiritual being
my mind is riddled wit scenes
of murders, murderers murderin murderers verses murdered then covered smothered im burnin and servin any other fucker who wants to get murdered word up
disturbin suburban residents
heaven sent an element of devilish hell sent shit
metal bends whenever shit gets to where it never fails to get tense
i bail when it gets settled
blazin trails just to vent, mellow
cooled off, never thrown off my game
if its too dull my dick is on soft all day.......im out
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Re: Tried to mess wit Multies and Complex word play, i was bored

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 19th, '08, 03:53

Haha, some parts of that were pretty dope. Cleverly written, and had a sick flow. Keep it up :y:.
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