NEW STEVE SPAG - (Half The Man) MUST READ!

[Steve Spag]

Just wrote this today. If you recall I had another peice called "Half The Man", it was actually written to the same beat. This time it's a little bit newer, and MUCH better. Here's the first verse of the track, got lots of rhyming and a sick flow for it that I hope you get. Anyways, let me know what you think as usual.

I know I'm slackin' just a bit, it's like I'm hit with this disease//
I've given up on all my friendships, only relying on weed//
I just really wanna fight it, but I'm lackin' self-esteem//
I've been pushed around too much as you just laughed and smashed my dreams//
Don't you know how you just crushed me? They say that I'm not Steve//
So what the fuck should I believe? I pour emotion on this beat//
I don't mimic anybody, I'm originality//
Just an artist with a sheet, I never follow, always lead//
But it seems for me lately, I'm just fallin' asleep//
Right with my hands on the wheel, and I am going full speed//
I've crashed and burned to the core, I hear them callin' for me//
I gotta give it my all, no longer resting in peace//
It's time to earn some respect, I wanna see it increase//
When I release all my tracks, you all are gonna be pleased//
You know that dedication, is what you're all gonna see//
I got a lot in my heart 'cause I define an emcee//
And you ain't half the fuckin' man that you thought you could be//
You don't got nothing on me, fuck all your apologies//
They don't mean nothing at all 'cause I've moved on from a scene//
When I was stuck in my life, you are appauled so you scream//
But I'm complex and I'm tricky just like these wicked rhyme-schemes//
I just slip out of your grip, and I'm just leavin' my teens//
I got a whole life ahead, and life just ain't what it seems//
So come along for the ride, I make you see the unseen//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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record this homo

[Robbie G]

Good stuff like usual man!

I'd record this, i can't anything wrong with it.

[Steve Spag]

Haha, thanks for the feed guys. I'm deffinetly gonna be recording this. I'll probably be throwin' it up on my album also. I always wanted to do something special with this beat, so I'm glad I held off for awhile until I improved in my raps, lmao.

[Emadyville]

I like it, good shit, record it

[JMG]

ur only half a man ? ha jp sick shit homie

[Nu Syd]

godam, crazy one, nice read

[Jay-19]

This is good. But one line doesn't really fit in here:

But I'm complex and I'm tricky just like these wicked rhyme-schemes//

Actually, I don't think this is that complex, and the rhyme-scheme ain't "wicked", it's good, shit it's really tight at some parts, but the whole verse ain't that complex. Other than that it's a really good verse, you got a good message in this verse and the flow is absolutely there man, I feel it. I like some rhymes more than others, but the one I like the best is this:

I've been pushed around too much as you just laughed and smashed my dreams//
Don't you know how you just crushed me? They say that I'm not Steve//

[Darkblade44431]

i like it, but u should probably work on more complex rhymes. keep at it, man, good job.

[Xplode]

Just wrote this today. If you recall I had another peice called "Half The Man", it was actually written to the same beat. This time it's a little bit newer, and MUCH better. Here's the first verse of the track, got lots of rhyming and a sick flow for it that I hope you get. Anyways, let me know what you think as usual.

I know I'm slackin' just a bit, it's like I'm hit with this disease//
I've given up on all my friendships, only relying on weed//
I just really wanna fight it, but I'm lackin' self-esteem//
I've been pushed around too much as you just laughed and smashed my dreams//
Don't you know how you just crushed me? They say that I'm not Steve//
So what the fuck should I believe? I pour emotion on this beat//
I don't mimic anybody, I'm originality//
Just an artist with a sheet, I never follow, always lead//
But it seems for me lately, I'm just fallin' asleep//
Right with my hands on the wheel, and I am going full speed//
I've crashed and burned to the core, I hear them callin' for me//
I gotta give it my all, no longer resting in peace//
It's time to earn some respect, I wanna see it increase//
When I release all my tracks, you all are gonna be pleased//
You know that dedication, is what you're all gonna see//
I got a lot in my heart 'cause I define an emcee//
And you ain't half the fuckin' man that you thought you could be//
You don't got nothing on me, fuck all your apologies//
They don't mean nothing at all 'cause I've moved on from a scene//
When I was stuck in my life, you are appauled so you scream//
But I'm complex and I'm tricky just like these wicked rhyme-schemes//
I just slip out of your grip, and I'm just leavin' my teens//
I got a whole life ahead, and life just ain't what it seems//
So come along for the ride, I make you see the unseen//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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dude :P half the man steve 'rap guru' spag this thing is sooo awesome bows

[Solace]

thats really good. when do you think youll be finish recording it? id love to hear it with a beat.

[Steve Spag]

Wow I'm glad I'm getting all this positive feedback from everyone. It's all appreciated as usual, and I'm super glad you all like it .

Keep the feed coming please.

And once I record I shall post it up.

[Solace]

I know. I wouldnt be suprised to see Steve Spag signed to a label soon...

[Steve Spag]

I just slip out of your grip, and I'm just leavin' my teens//
I got a whole life ahead, and life just ain't what it seems//

Brought a tear to my eye. Makes me remember the childhood I waisted.

Deep shit man, you're only a few steps away from making it big.

Haha, thanks dude. Yeah I can't believe I'm fuckin' turning 20 in 2 weeks. Scary how time flies by.

I know. I wouldnt be suprised to see Steve Spag signed to a label soon...

Thanks for the support, and again, glad you like my shit, lol. And yes, I'd REALLY like to get signed someday, lol. It's this or nothin' for me, and I don't plan on giving up.

[Solace]

The next Asher Roth *cough cough*. Lets contact Akon asap.