Friends Strike like Lightning

[neversnooze]

this was something i wrote thinking about a goodfriend who backstabbed, im not a good writer but hope u enjoy

I could of sworn we would live through old age
but you had to tare our bracelit friendship
buddy's at birth, enemy's on earth
we were like twins, knowing each others favorites
when you lied, you ruined it

we did and shared everything together
we even split a cigarrette
with me taking the bitter half
it would just make us laugh

friends strike like lightning
traumatized by the scars that hurt so badly
the pain will never go away

[Solace]

i liked it not sure if its supposed to rhyme, but i liked it because its emotional. Its true to the heart. Good job Not many people are checking out my Jealousy Woes III, so heres some shameless advertising :P Could you check it out, id appreciate it!

[Emadyville]

I thought if looked at more of a poem then lyrics it was some good shit