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Goin Light...

Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '08, 06:40

Illiterate Fuckas LISTEN UP. Im GLAD YOUR HATIN.
Proves My SHIT IS LOVED An "IT'LL BUST" Like MASTERBATION!
Yah Sound-Songs Is RIPPED ENOUGH So "GIVE IT UP" Like Proud-Moms At GRADUATION!
Half Your RAPS IS BASIC. Your "HEAT" IS BESTED.
If I READ YAH BEST SHIT Then "IT GIVES UP Z's" Like SLEEP AN RESTIN!
So If You HIT AN PUNCH ME? Lol An Wana "See SHIT GET UGLY"?... You Can PEEP REFLECTION!
So Dun Make Me REPEAT THA QUESTION. Cus Its NOT THA CHEDDA.
An Yah Text Is NOT FA BETTA
You Could Never "Beat" This "Verse"... Its Like an ACCAPELLA!
These Guys-Say My RHYMIN IS FRAIL So SIGNIN WIT LABELS Only Time-"Jay...-"ROC A FELLA"!
Nope.. Notta Fag :y:

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Re: Goin Light...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 22nd, '08, 06:56

im not even sayin shit about this cuzz what kind of fag leaves the caps lock on when hes writin
looks gay as fuck guy
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 22nd, '08, 07:02

he does that to show where the rhymes are. to show how many multies he throws in.

i wanna know why dude doesnt do audio?
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby Emadyville » Jun 22nd, '08, 14:40

Pretty good, loved the ending of this.
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby Boston » Jun 22nd, '08, 14:56

some of your punchlines are tight
keep it up
how long you been writing for?

feed back appreciated
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '08, 22:39

sticcy z wrote:im not even sayin shit about this cuzz what kind of fag leaves the caps lock on when hes writin
looks gay as fuck guy


Lol Wow Dis Nikka Got Problems .... Iono How His Wack Ass Came Up With Tha Conclusions That, Im Gay By Cappin Come Words .... Elevate Yah Fuckin Game Before Your Wack Ass Comes At Talent, Kid ... An I Hope Hes Tryin To Insult Me .... Otherwise Id Think Hes Retarded ..... "Caps Lock On" .... I Only Capped Tha Rhymes .... To Show Them?? ... Nahhh Thats Too Obvios, Huh Nikka? .... Find Another Reason Why Id Cap "ROC A FELLA" ... an Not "illiterate" ..... DummFuck I Never Had Caps Locked .... Like i Said, Take Yah Trash Audios/Lyrics .... An Elevate Yah Skills, An Write Soemthin DECENT .... Before You Knock Soemthin Better Then You ...... Its Wuhever Doe ..... Imma Take a Guess An Say .... Your Hatin Cus u Know Im Better Then Youll Ever Be ..... An Im Still Gettin Better .... This Was LIGHT ... I Didnt Go Hard ... Which Is Why You Cant Say Anything About My Skill .... Juss How It Looks ... Lol Leave Tha Thread Playboy,

But Thanks For Readin @ Everybody Else .... Appreciate It
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 22nd, '08, 22:46

J roc wrote:
sticcy z wrote:im not even sayin shit about this cuzz what kind of fag leaves the caps lock on when hes writin
looks gay as fuck guy


Lol Wow Dis Nikka Got Problems .... Iono How His Wack Ass Came Up With Tha Conclusions That, Im Gay By Cappin Come Words .... Elevate Yah Fuckin Game Before Your Wack Ass Comes At Talent, Kid ... An I Hope Hes Tryin To Insult Me .... Otherwise Id Think Hes Retarded ..... "Caps Lock On" .... I Only Capped Tha Rhymes .... To Show Them?? ... Nahhh Thats Too Obvios, Huh Nikka? .... Find Another Reason Why Id Cap "ROC A FELLA" ... an Not "illiterate" ..... DummFuck I Never Had Caps Locked .... Like i Said, Take Yah Trash Audios/Lyrics .... An Elevate Yah Skills, An Write Soemthin DECENT .... Before You Knock Soemthin Better Then You ...... Its Wuhever Doe ..... Imma Take a Guess An Say .... Your Hatin Cus u Know Im Better Then Youll Ever Be ..... An Im Still Gettin Better .... This Was LIGHT ... I Didnt Go Hard ... Which Is Why You Cant Say Anything About My Skill .... Juss How It Looks ... Lol Leave Tha Thread Playboy,

But Thanks For Readin @ Everybody Else .... Appreciate It

HoW AbOuT yOU bLOW deeZ FUCkin nuTS
id school you homeboy...
ive destroyed many people way better than you...
and before you come talkin shit why dont you learn how to fucking type nikka hahahahaahahaha :smoking:

chet, shall i school this faggot???
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '08, 22:52

sticcy z wrote:
J roc wrote:
sticcy z wrote:im not even sayin shit about this cuzz what kind of fag leaves the caps lock on when hes writin
looks gay as fuck guy


Lol Wow Dis Nikka Got Problems .... Iono How His Wack Ass Came Up With Tha Conclusions That, Im Gay By Cappin Come Words .... Elevate Yah Fuckin Game Before Your Wack Ass Comes At Talent, Kid ... An I Hope Hes Tryin To Insult Me .... Otherwise Id Think Hes Retarded ..... "Caps Lock On" .... I Only Capped Tha Rhymes .... To Show Them?? ... Nahhh Thats Too Obvios, Huh Nikka? .... Find Another Reason Why Id Cap "ROC A FELLA" ... an Not "illiterate" ..... DummFuck I Never Had Caps Locked .... Like i Said, Take Yah Trash Audios/Lyrics .... An Elevate Yah Skills, An Write Soemthin DECENT .... Before You Knock Soemthin Better Then You ...... Its Wuhever Doe ..... Imma Take a Guess An Say .... Your Hatin Cus u Know Im Better Then Youll Ever Be ..... An Im Still Gettin Better .... This Was LIGHT ... I Didnt Go Hard ... Which Is Why You Cant Say Anything About My Skill .... Juss How It Looks ... Lol Leave Tha Thread Playboy,

But Thanks For Readin @ Everybody Else .... Appreciate It

HoW AbOuT yOU bLOW deeZ FUCkin nuTS
id school you homeboy...
ive destroyed many people way better than you...
and before you come talkin shit why dont you learn how to fucking type nikka hahahahaahahaha :smoking:

chet, shall i school this faggot???


Nigga's Censored, Lol Dunno How u Talkin Greasy Bout That

Lol, School Me ..... Nahh Matter Of Fact ..... Quote a Bar You Wrote That You Think Is "Nice" .... Lol I Wanna See Wha I Should Be Scared Of Lol .... Smh Better Then Me?... Like Who? ..... Lol Since I Never Dropped Anything Hard On This Site .... Juss Lightwork/Keystyles ..... You Cant Really Say Shit Nigga, Your Wack... Id Rip You In Half .... Quote Yah Best Bar .... All You Needa Do Playboy
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 22nd, '08, 22:59

heres a whole fuckin verse bitch

walkin down the road, gettin bad glances, confused as a sceptic wonderin if the apollo landed, the fingers pointed at me, always 24/7, its like you think im a devil and your an saint from heaven, irony is my hilartiy,

thats why i laughed, when america found out, the goverment is our main charity, bush spent that money, for his longevity, to tell the truth, i wig out in the booth, cry about ya self, and see a homeless kid, broke with no shoes,

instead of helpin out, you give the cold shoulder, call up the 5-0, cuzz of the mysterious behaivor, that i am showin, make a sphynay rock harder, than betothan, bodies start to stink, afeter the first stage, of corrosion,

yall still cant detect, always on the run im a usaul suspect.
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:08

LOL Punchlines? .... Anywhere? .... Nope ..... Multies? ... Anywhere? .... Nope .... Wordplay? .. Anywhere? ... Nope ...

Lol An I Peeped One Of Your Audios ..... Nigga Dont Even Gotta Flow .... Lol,

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Lmao @ Snitchin .... Cant Even Stay On Yah Topic .... Talkin Bout Tha Government .... Then Randomly Goin Into Braggin About Music ... Lol, Then Change Tha Topic Right Away Again .... More Examples Of Not Stayin On Yah Topic Too .... Like I Said ... Elevate Yah Game Kid
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:16

J roc wrote:LOL Punchlines? .... Anywhere? .... Nope ..... Multies? ... Anywhere? .... Nope .... Wordplay? .. Anywhere? ... Nope ...

Lol An I Peeped One Of Your Audios ..... ***** Dont Even Gotta Flow .... Lol,

sticcy Bitch wrote:Call Up Tha 5-0


Lmao @ Snitchin .... Cant Even Stay On Yah Topic .... Talkin Bout Tha Government .... Then Randomly Goin Into Braggin About Music ... Lol, Then Change Tha Topic Right Away Again .... More Examples Of Not Stayin On Yah Topic Too .... Like I Said ... Elevate Yah Game Kid

you really are a retard if you read the line right after the 5-0 comment i was talkin about someone else callin em on me...
i dont have to talk to yo ass man...i am way better than you ive been way more place than yo ass homie, ive done shows muhfucka...ive done songs with bigg fucking artist dogg...
and flow? mother fucker my flow is out of this fuckin world.
you dont know shit dog,, your just tryin to act like your all hood and shit when your ass prolly lives next to john brown
ask any undergound artist from the midwest, they know who i am...
ask any undergound artist from the south they prolly know who i am...

fuck you man
you cant even talk right.
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:25

sticcy z wrote:
J roc wrote:LOL Punchlines? .... Anywhere? .... Nope ..... Multies? ... Anywhere? .... Nope .... Wordplay? .. Anywhere? ... Nope ...

Lol An I Peeped One Of Your Audios ..... ***** Dont Even Gotta Flow .... Lol,

sticcy Bitch wrote:Call Up Tha 5-0


Lmao @ Snitchin .... Cant Even Stay On Yah Topic .... Talkin Bout Tha Government .... Then Randomly Goin Into Braggin About Music ... Lol, Then Change Tha Topic Right Away Again .... More Examples Of Not Stayin On Yah Topic Too .... Like I Said ... Elevate Yah Game Kid

you really are a retard if you read the line right after the 5-0 comment i was talkin about someone else callin em on me...
i dont have to talk to yo ass man...i am way better than you ive been way more place than yo ass homie, ive done shows muhfucka...ive done songs with bigg fucking artist dogg...
and flow? mother fucker my flow is out of this fuckin world.
you dont know shit dog,, your just tryin to act like your all hood and shit when your ass prolly lives next to john brown
ask any undergound artist from the midwest, they know who i am...
ask any undergound artist from the south they prolly know who i am...

fuck you man
you cant even talk right.


Lol Callin On You? ... For What? .... Da Fuck You Do? .... Lol Or Are You Juss Makin Shit Up So You Can Fit It Into Your Basic Rhyme Scheme? ... Lol, Your Not Better Then Me ..... My Post Aboves Tells You Why .... Which Is All Tha Complexity In Makin a Song ..... Since I Have Them .... An You Dont, Im Better ..... Lil Nigga Explain How Your More Complex Then Me ..... No Punchlines, No Wordplay, Basic Rhymes, Barely, If At All Any Multiple Rhymes, Cant Stay On Yah Topic, An Yah Flow Gotta Be Sped Up, It Aint On Point ..... Lol Smooth It Out Nigga ..... Lol Trust I Gotta Harder Life Then You Have ..... Pisses Me Off When Lil Niggas Like You .... Go On About Gettin Tha Cops Gettin Called On You ..... Actin Like Bad Boys Over Tha Net ..... You Wack Kid .... I Couldnt Care If People Know You .... Dont Mean Your Good Does It? ... Lol Nahh, An I Can "Talk" Right ..... When Did You Hear Me "Talk"? .... Nigga's Skitzophrenic I Swear..
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:34

well one you dont have to say ni.gga in every other sentance, i dont believe that word is in the dictonary
your shit aint complex kid...get the fuck over yourself, do you even have audio????? fuck man no one knows you...
and dog complex shit isnt always the best shit..listen to eminem's shit when he first came out...shit aint complex at all, but it was off the hook...
dog you dont even fucking know me so why are you actin like you do?
you dont know where i live
you dont know anything about me
fuck off dogg.
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:38

It's funny how you always tell people to fuck off when you're the one that gets yourself into this shit.
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Re: Goin Light...

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:42

Cwayon_Murder wrote:It's funny how you always tell people to fuck off when you're the one that gets yourself into this shit.

its funny you always have a smartass comment to say to me.
i dont know you guy, so why you talkin to me
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