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Postby JMG » Jun 22nd, '08, 23:38

not much effort bascially a keystyle whatcha think


im the boss of this enterpraise
dont even think about crossin them center lines
you'll never raise above what ive created
ur only get thrown into the fire blazin
under my amazin rhyme equations
but im traped inside a maze an times erasin
with every tick an tock sweat just drips an drops
then my mind just hits the dot
so i run quick and hop over the picket top
thicken plots with alot of drama
got me sippin shots of vodka
now im hittin blocks of conca-rete
ur styles obsolete mines orginal
when i write is like a ritural
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 23rd, '08, 01:53

i think if you dont put in much effort, why should anyone put in effort to feed ?
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Postby JMG » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:06

well most of the stuff i write i keep it private cuz im writing for my album, so this is just doin a lil somethin cuz im bored. so im not beggin for feed, and i dont give a fuck if someone puts effort into it or not. honestly peoples opinion on this site dosent mean a damn thing to me, i know where i stand.
alot of shit i write on here i wont even go back to it. so basically when i drop a little somethin on here just tell me its good, cuz thats all that there is to be said. peace
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Postby Kosovic » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:32

Jojjjjjjjjjjjjjj another one wants to be rapper. We have so many rappers on this planet....i wonder who is going to pretend to be the audience.
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Postby JMG » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:33

i guess bar
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Postby Kosovic » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:34

He raps too.
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Postby JMG » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:42

yeah but cmon now
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Postby Kosovic » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:48

What?
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Postby Emadyville » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:59

I liked it
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Postby JMG » Jun 23rd, '08, 02:59

hes scottish
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jun 23rd, '08, 04:24

And your an apparent egomaniac. If you want people to honestly give you feed on something, but you think your the shit already, whats the point of asking? Apparently your not looking for tips on improvement, so why ask for reviews?
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Postby JMG » Jun 23rd, '08, 04:26

boo fuckin whoo cry about it. im not askin for my reviews im givin my fans on this site there fix.
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Postby Kosovic » Jun 23rd, '08, 12:53

Yup totally agree, he is our hero, he is the shit.
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Postby Kosovic » Jun 23rd, '08, 22:43

JMG wrote:hes scottish


So what?
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Postby JMG » Jun 23rd, '08, 22:58

i no so what
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