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Practice

Postby Rain Matrix » Jun 26th, '08, 21:07

somethings messing with tha Wrong Rapper think about it forever is a Long Hazard
I'll straight crush u like a Compacter then blow up in yur face like a Bomb Backwards
in this country tha people Call Tha Shots lets keep it that way their too Small Ta Talk
my question to u is will u give All Ya Got rain matrix burns thru tracks like a Molotov
I live in broken America so this Lands Free no representation as u tax my Family
a sniper automatically makes a Man Bleed thats what u Can't See I have no Plan B... ha ha ha
lady liberty wouldn't it be Sweet Ta Love Her if I know if I put a Peice Up Blood Spurts
u stay ravaged my lyrics Eat Ya Structure then give u eight slashes like a Pizza Cutter
I'll unearth yur postion like a new Mine Yard I'll electrocute ya frame to yur fucking Spine Arks
pieces of yur brain stick to me like Pine Tar that's just one way I'll leave yur Mind Scarred
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Re: Practice

Postby Arabian Shady » Jun 30th, '08, 17:37

:o
dude that shit was off the charts!!!,there was just nuthin wrong wid that,flow was top notch and all other factors structures,multies and meaning were amazing!
sick shit rain :y: :y: :y:
peace :worship: :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Practice

Postby Rain Matrix » Jun 30th, '08, 18:16

thanks in my last song I used a similar verse
but that topics locked so I'll be writing some new stuff after tha battles

long live reality... kill yur t.v. in all actuality tha election makes me queasy
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