random freestyle

[Greeeeeeg69]

yo they like to call me the devil
cause i can take shit to a new level
and kill you with rhymes unseen
when it hits you it wont make a scene
but if you think youve had enough
your obviously not really tough
cause i spit hot fucking fire
builds up into a flaming spire



its okay i guess
but leave some feedback

[gladimnotsoluble]

Try to make sense.
Try to have some multies.
Try not to be so generic.

Keep writing, but wait til you got something hotter then post it.

[Greeeeeeg69]

thanks, that was off my head just trying to see how good i am.

[Solace]

Its alright, as people have told me, in freestyles to to make your lines longer. And try the multies yeah.