another freestyle

by **Greeeeeeg69** » Jul 2nd, '08, 02:37

I dont give a fuck what you say
all i do is make my pay
by making art out of simple words
breeding soldiers by the herds
making my life more livable
cause what you did is unforgivable
my anger is boiling over top
keep it going and ill fucking pop
get a nine and hit the street
making a rhymthmic beat
so sweet it tastes like a treat.

leave some feedback

by **The Toy Soldier** » Jul 2nd, '08, 04:37

Greeeeeeg69 wrote:I dont give a fuck what you say
all i do is make my pay
by making art out of simple words
breeding soldiers by the herds
making my life more livable
cause what you did is unforgivable
my anger is boiling over top
keep it going and ill fucking pop
get a nine and hit the street
making a rhymthmic beat
so sweet it tastes like a treat.

leave some feedback

Look Out Cuz The Soldier Just Spawned
Fresh Out The Oven-But Brown Not A Blonde
Its Time For me and these Words To Permanently Bond
Once he Blows and POPS
Toy Soldier Rises to the Top
Hate my Lyrics tell me to Stop?
What Are You Some Ryhming Cop?
Either Way I pass The Mic back To Greeeeeeeg
And Make the Shock of the ryhmes go from Head To Leg

Nice freestyle Its pretty Good! Try Working a little more on your Transitions.

by **Robbie G** » Jul 2nd, '08, 04:41

Greg, It wasn't bad but it was pretty simple and honestly a little boring.

soldier, I liked it.

best line:

Look Out Cuz The Soldier Just Spawned
Fresh Out The Oven-But Brown Not A Blonde

by **The Toy Soldier** » Jul 2nd, '08, 04:44

Shady Babie wrote:Greg, It wasn't bad but it was pretty simple and honestly a little boring.

soldier, I liked it.

best line:

Look Out Cuz The Soldier Just Spawned
Fresh Out The Oven-But Brown Not A Blonde

Thanx man You're Really Encouraging me I Used that Line to reference:

by making art out of simple words
breeding soldiers by the herds

I Tried To Continue the Flow and I'm Like woah MY NAME IS TOY SOLDIER But Yeah thanks

by **Kosovic** » Jul 2nd, '08, 11:55

How bad writing is these days. Smh at everyone.

by **Greeeeeeg69** » Jul 2nd, '08, 13:42

i know i just posted this for some feedback. thanks guys
soldier that was pretty sick

by **JMG** » Jul 2nd, '08, 15:09

*insert insult here*

by **Kosovic** » Jul 2nd, '08, 15:22

Im oh so entertained.

by **Robbie G** » Jul 2nd, '08, 15:26

Kosovic wrote:How bad writing is these days. Smh at everyone.

Everyone has to start somewhere, they'll improve.

by **The Toy Soldier** » Jul 2nd, '08, 16:30

Kosovic wrote:Im oh so entertained.

Pick Up The Mic and continue the freestyle i actually havent heard youre skills

by **Kosovic** » Jul 2nd, '08, 17:43

My skills? Lol....

by **Robbie G** » Jul 2nd, '08, 18:00

he'z got mad skillz yo

by **Kosovic** » Jul 2nd, '08, 18:13

Who got mad skills?

by **The Toy Soldier** » Jul 2nd, '08, 18:17

Shady Babie wrote:he'z got mad skillz yo

Yeah I know and I wanna Hear Em

by **Kosovic** » Jul 2nd, '08, 19:27

Who got mad skills? Will anyone explain me?

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