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Fuck You

Postby Robbie G » Jul 2nd, '08, 20:17

Wrote this for my album that sucks and that will never come out. Didn't like it that much though so thought i'd post it here...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcdICGfoIEk( Only second verse)

first verse.

Fuck ya'll if you don't care for me
Fuck ya'll if you won't say a prayer for me
you know what they say it's cliche but it's true
a chosen few but, keep your enemies even closer to you
so i don't care for you if your not with me
fuck ya if you disagree, don't you dare go dissin me
listen to me cuz If ya dont I guarantee you'll die fast like MTV
you ain't even come close to empty me
ask your girl bout how she slept with me
I ain't asking you to love me
just don't think you'll ever dispose of me....

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2nd verse

If you doubt me, you must not know much about me
I ain't buying your fuckin cookies, don't try and girl scout me
No I ain't a gangster, but neither are you
atleast in my rhymes i'm spitting it true
so this song isn't calling you out
just saying im the one you should talk about
like they always told me
haters can only embold me
I need me, Myself and I
Middle fingers in the air it fly's
screaming fuck ya'll 'till the day I die
ya wouldn't be impressed if I started to fly
your lonely bitch, so you smoke and get high
my lungs are clear so i can steer
my life in the direction of many years
So many tears, and pacs left us
12 years and nobodies stepped up
it over done and your though
in his memory FUCK YOU!

Heres another random verse. :p

let me explain, let me show you my pain
look at my bloody hands I'll never wash away the stain
look at my life and tell me what you think
not much to go by watch it pass as I slowly shrink
it's like what you get when you mix and match
things and people, you should never get too attached
let me tell you now it will never stay
from day to day slowly it all goes away
look at me like I want to scream it
should I get a degree? Or just leave it
the choices I must make and the answers to find
do it now or break, wheres the button to rewrind?
you never get a first chance and a second impression
so go fast and don't wait oh how the pressure is pressin
'till the end I say it to my friend
let me explain how it's on you I depend...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcdICGfoIEk
Last edited by Robbie G on Jul 2nd, '08, 20:29, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Fuck You

Postby Kosovic » Jul 2nd, '08, 20:22

It doesnt impress me, just like 99.9% of the site's new people.
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Re: Fuck You

Postby Robbie G » Jul 2nd, '08, 20:30

Chet wrote:1 youtube url doesn't work :whistle:

2nd (audio) one was pretty good, just needs more emotion


Thanks, and no idea why it won't work, it's the right link.

Kosovic wrote:It doesnt impress me, just like 99.9% of the site's new people.


Thanks your right, I'll try to be different.
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Re: Fuck You

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 2nd, '08, 20:38

Nice Id say it would go great with Eminem's Soldier Instrumental It would sound very good.
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Re: Fuck You

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 4th, '08, 15:10

nice bro sounds fucking dank
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