Getting better

[Greeeeeeg69]

Yo im feeling the shit that you spittin out
but how long do you think you can sit in doubt
Im the king of cyphers and you should respect
ill let you sigh fer a moment then get rechecked
cause ima drop these bombs lika stealth bomber
itll rock your moms purse lika wealth palmer
i could run circles around your crazy ass
so much fun kirk'll beam down to watch me blast
your ass off of the stage you ignorant fuck
hit you so fast your friends cant say "duck!"
but hey its your fault for steppin up to me
if you really want to beat me, heres the key
get some crack and smoke alot of it
not a pipe, a whole fucking pot of it
grab a snack and coke and start writing
about how much you love dart fighting
cause thats for dumbfuck just like you
look at yourself, cant even tie your shoe.

[The Toy Soldier]

Yo im feeling the shit that you spittin out
but how long do you think you can sit in doubt
Im the king of cyphers and you should respect
ill let you sigh fer a moment then get rechecked
cause ima drop these bombs lika stealth bomber
itll rock your moms purse lika wealth palmer
i could run circles around your crazy ass
so much fun kirk'll beam down to watch me blast
your ass off of the stage you ignorant fuck
hit you so fast your friends cant say "duck!"
but hey its your fault for steppin up to me
if you really want to beat me, heres the key
get some crack and smoke alot of it
not a pipe, a whole fucking pot of it
grab a snack and coke and start writing
about how much you love dart fighting
cause thats for dumbfuck just like you
look at yourself, cant even tie your shoe.

You shoulde saved that for a rap battle

[Darkblade44431]

lol, yeh. cud have saved for a battle. it was alright, keep it up.

[The Toy Soldier]

lol, yeh. cud have saved for a battle. it was alright, keep it up.

OT:diggin that Eminem Mii ima make one

[Greeeeeeg69]

i wouldve but i just started writing and writing so i wanted to know if it was dank shit or what

[The Toy Soldier]

i wouldve but i just started writing and writing so i wanted to know if it was dank shit or what

remember that it isnt quantity its quality

it isnt about posting 5 freestyles and asking if they're good its about posting on freestyle WORTH 5

[Emadyville]

Yes better, saw some doubles, keep it up,

[Kosovic]

Nnnnnnot impressing. Sorry but the Eminem trend faded away already. In America, u better be black and rap.

[Greeeeeeg69]

dont care. hes the shit and id rather rap like him than any the fucks who rap today.
Eminem spoke the truth

[Kosovic]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww really....aww now i am amused. Stalneys all around.

[Greeeeeeg69]

true that. Idc. Hes my role model

[Kosovic]

Reeeally. And you tell me that for?

[Greeeeeeg69]

lol idk. You called me stanly. owell. Your still a flaming douchbag.

[Robbie G]

big improvement from your first stuff.

[Greeeeeeg69]

thnx shady =]