Fight Me

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
I really hope you stop actin' like you're oh so tough,
before you fuck around and get locked in cuffs,
I think you're acting a little too cocky for this shit,
get another hobby other than having your wrists slit, (haha)
and how come whenever i see you, ya act like a lyricist,
if you ever battled with me, you'll wish you never existed,
cause my rhymes are mentally twisted and straight up detrimental,
but you do blow me away, with your breath; man get some dental,
(haha) my rhymes will definitely make you go overboard,
you'll wake up bleeding and aching right on the shore,
crying out for help, but no one can hear you,
you thought people would help you, just cause they fear you,
you've got no heart, for you theres nothing inside,
you're just mad at me cause in a battle with me you'd cry,
call up McDonalds cause the chicken is gunna be deep-fried,
you've never seen or read lyrics from a real mc,
with a flow and passion that are comparable to me,
but I think God really put me here to curse and cuss,
and scream out 24/7 "I DONT GIVE A FUCK",
I think God put you here to make Soulja Boy look good,
man get a life you're not from the "hood",
when I get on the mic, you can call me Satan,
then when I win the battle, everyone will be hatin',
my rhymes are an issue of playboy, you jack to it non-stop,
they've distracted you're mother from suckin' my cock,
i got rhymes so tight that they can choke the reader,
and when another person reads it, it's like follow the leader,
don't get me wrong, I'm not pretending to be a lyrical miracle,
I just can't stop rhyming...I'm way too hysterical,
and before I stop I really hope that you know this:
you'll obviously never become a true lyricist bitch.

[Chorus]
Give up the carreer its all a big joke,
in a real rap battle you'd probably choke,
focus on reality, leave hip-hop,
stop saying that cha always rob some shops,
you're neither a gangsta...or a rapper,
stop saying you'll get my bitch and cap her,
because we all its a big joke.

[Verse 2] [Almost done, working on a couple lines]
Second verse, second chance just to strike back,
to all those rappers who say their styles aren't wack,
im here, and I'm bringing on a full launched attack,
because true rhymes are what you obviously lack,
just cause your black doesnt mean you can rap,
doesn't mean your a gangsta, doesn't mean your jack,
get off the crack man, before you get brutally smacked,
get a bodyguard 'cause you got to watch you're back,
the only time you're in a fight is when you get beat up,
for calling someone younger than you a little cunt,
now another little cunt is coming you're way,
and when I go to a club I'll beat all the lesbians and gays,
that means you too bitch, I aint got time to play,
I'll make you disappear as if you were David Blaine,
("ta da, the little bitch ran away!")
don't complain little boy, just cause you can't attain,
any skills, any bills, definately can't attain any pills
that you oh so badly want to swallow,
couple pills of extasy take your mind off the sorrow,
take you're mind off your dreams of a carrer
dreams to be famous, live in Beverly Hills,
it's kinda funny how bad you would kill man, just to be ill, and
have a glimpse of stardom, only just until,
you realized it's just a dream, you just wanna scream,
cause you don't know what it means, head full of steam,
just wishing to be what you could never be,
a rapper, a gangster, a man whos got all the respect,
fuck, you'll never be that, you're so damn wrecked.
you're acting like a genius, you flunked out of kindergarten twice,
I saw you trying to have a thought, looked like you were scratching at lice,
haha, if you're so sick, come on over and fight me,
cause I know on the streets you'll run at the sight of me.

[Chorus x2]

[Outro]

Haha, yeah bitch,
don't start saying shit and darting off,
cause you know your faggot ass is gunna get it,
fuck your shit talk and fuck you,
haha, get a life, or better yet...
FIGHT ME

I really must thank "imgladimnotsoluble" since he or she is the one that got me from 6 lines to over 50.

Note that its not gunna be recorded. I aint got a mic.

[Steve Spag]

Not bad, not bad.

don't get me wrong, I'm not pretending to be a lyrical miracle,
but I just can't stop rhyming, I'm way too hysterical,

That was my favourite part.
Keep it up dude .

[Solace]

Not bad, not bad.

don't get me wrong, I'm not pretending to be a lyrical miracle,
but I just can't stop rhyming, I'm way too hysterical,

That was my favourite part.
Keep it up dude .

Hey thanks Glad it wasnt horrible.

[gladimnotsoluble]

I liked some of what I saw, but you definitely got to drop more bars then that, so I can feel where you're going, but I liked it

[Rain Matrix]

metaphors are a comparitive tool and very common in underground
I use them a lot but no one seems to notice

anyway start out simple

EX: there's real trouble now cops are Chasing Him Man
------fuck that "I double down on pigs" like Bacon N Ham

not tha best metaphor of all time but a metaphor all tha same
think about what yur saying and find a connection

yur piece was nice and flowed well keep practicing

[Solace]

arent metaphors when you compare 2 things without like or as?

and i dont understand what your saying in your example. thats also a simile, since you said "like" isnt it?

and thanks for giving feedback, both of you, rain matrix and gladimnotsoluble.

EDIT: @gladimnotsoluble, I've written a bit so I hope you can check it out

[Makaveli525]

and how come whenever i see you, ya act like a lyricist,
if you ever battled with me, you'll wish you never existed,

How does one "act like a lyricist"?

[Solace]

and how come whenever i see you, ya act like a lyricist,
if you ever battled with me, you'll wish you never existed,

How does one "act like a lyricist"?

someone who pretends they can rhyme?

[Steve Spag]

Much better.

[Solace]

Much better.

Thanks man

[Tash8]

EX: there's real trouble now cops are Chasing Him Man
------fuck that "I double down on pigs" like Bacon N Ham

not tha best metaphor of all time but a metaphor all tha same
think about what yur saying and find a connection

That's not a metaphor genius, that's a simile and a wordplay... not downgrading it's complexity but just correcting your misinterpretation of it.

[Solace]

EX: there's real trouble now cops are Chasing Him Man
------fuck that "I double down on pigs" like Bacon N Ham

not tha best metaphor of all time but a metaphor all tha same
think about what yur saying and find a connection

That's not a metaphor genius, that's a simile and a wordplay... not downgrading it's complexity but just correcting your misinterpretation of it.

yay i was right. but i didnt understand what it means anyways

[Ka0t1c]

Ayo, stop acting like mister tough guy,
before you fuck around and get locked in cuffs (oh my!),
you're acting a little too cocky for this shit,
get another hobby other than having your wrists slit, (haha)
and how come whenever i see you, ya act like a lyricist,
if you ever battled with me, you'll wish you never existed,

after that, it gets messy

punchlines are difficult (for me at least, nearly impossible but this has both punches and metaphors)

but here's one I wrote which is my best one (out of 1 or 2 i've ever written, lol)

u think ur tough as an ox but you're soft b/c i could just squeeze ya
plus i'll stuff ur crust in a box and im not talkin of pizza (Tombstone pizza)

stuff ur crust in a box = put your body in a coffin

Copyright Kevin McCoy 2006

[Tash8]

EX: there's real trouble now cops are Chasing Him Man
------fuck that "I double down on pigs" like Bacon N Ham

not tha best metaphor of all time but a metaphor all tha same
think about what yur saying and find a connection

That's not a metaphor genius, that's a simile and a wordplay... not downgrading it's complexity but just correcting your misinterpretation of it.

yay i was right. but i didnt understand what it means anyways

pigs is another word for cops, basically a downgrading term for cops

and bacon N ham, bacon is pig.. so it's a wordplay using pigs as in both cops and bacon...

so i double down on them pigs, like bacon N ham

[Solace]

yeah i get that, but what does "I double down" mean??

@Kaotic, it got messy i guess because I wrote that part after I wrote what you said made it messy. Ill try to fix that up. Cool metaphor+punchline. That one i can understand.