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anything i want i should get b/c im a good guy

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 8th, '08, 04:29

eventually i predict that if i stick to my script
everything which is meant to be will present to me quick
so mentally fit's the key i pick to free from the abyss
any mysteries, as well as my history

now i must lift debri for my gift to sieze
or i will miss my siege against devious trickeries
and i won't risk prestige since im equipped to censor mischief immediately
cuz lyrically i give no leniency, im pissed really

cuz substance i see from many identities, well that's a bit silly, yes
but assembling interesting enemies by beginning the trends the Government tends
instead of 100% genuine authenticity
of an uncommon person with the intent to lead
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: anything i want i should get b/c im a good guy

Postby Emadyville » Jul 8th, '08, 04:45

Rhymes were nice, didn't make a whole lot of sense to me, but I'm also tired as shit so excuse that comment if it does, overall good job :y:
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Re: anything i want i should get b/c im a good guy

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 8th, '08, 04:52

thank you, but it might not make sense at first and plus this is "rough" still

but what these nifty words mean are that, when i stay with what i feel is right, i will be able to spot the negativity surrounding me and then when i conquer that i can uncover who, what and where the enemies really are to help others "see" and guide them to their own inner wisdom...yeah
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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