Ok I tried Harder this time

[The Toy Soldier]

OK I know Eminem Remixed this song already but I was like trying to freestyle to the instrumentaland i was surprised that it sounded a little more fluent (yeah very originial I know) it features my friend jesta for the secodn verse cuz i wanted to see how he could ryhme i dont nkow about the flow on his though

Whooo
Yeah
It's Cintrak a.k.a Music Track
Break it down
I got a lot of emceeing to do before I rap
And I ain't got a line to waste
Let's make it

they say ima wanksta but they never stop frontin
said they goin beat my ass but they never do nothin
bring along the third friend now they wanna start somethin
i got a friend of mine
he really can unwind
lyrics are just too fine
named jesta of the crime
no time for childish ryhmes
these lyrics arent benign
these words that are my sign
to spit another line
worth more than nicks and dimes
these are what i call good times
time to change the words
words that give a curse
looks like i cant get worse
need healin from the nurse
looks like i need for me to change the verse
looks like i still roll
damages take no toll
vote for me on the poll
i can be really cold
my words will hit the mold
not like shootin stars
i aint no smash mouth
theyre pure music scars
i still have yet to be a g that is notorious
too late time to change it to the chor-ee-us

[Chorus]
they say ima wanksta but they never stop fronting
said they goin beat my ass but they never do nothin
i just call jesta up when i need to pop something
but you gonna geel my ryhmes
you gonna hit rewind
ill rap you out a long time
better compose ur mind

[verse 2]
jesta here and they sayin stuff
about ma new found career
and jeerin at what it is
i put here in this lyrical gear
but ima break it down to sho yall
i aint clownin around no more
fuck jesta call me the king the ruler
big or small i will run it
i could run g8 sumwit with out politics
ill use music and create less bullshit
than the idiots running it
but listen to me now dont take me as a fool
chi i aint fuckin around im down to eliminated you all
cintraks show them how we do it cmon we doin this
poppin illness and we got whad it takes to show da big hitters
that we will take over coz i dont give a fuck if you notice im gunna blow this up like a reactor in grenoble
i do my shit flow or quick ya no whad a mean?
i do it with a tongue roll to drum roll
if i didnt i would have fun yo but dont forget
i dont regret a single thing ive dun i love being blunt
now bite me im done kick it wit us we never had enough cmon

they say ima wanksta but they never stop fronting
said they goin beat my ass but they never do nothin
i just call cintrak up when i need to pop something
but you gonna geel my ryhmes
you gonna hit rewind
ill rap you out a long time
better compose ur mind

its Wanksta By The way if you havent figured it out by now

tell me that this is better than the other one i came up with.

BTW Im Cintrak if thats a Q

[Kosovic]

Ok, u convinced me....i will jump from top floor.

[The Toy Soldier]

Ok, u convinced me....i will jump from top floor.

haha i know that its translated for "its ok" cuz if it was bad u wouldve said "its like sucking dick"
thanks for the positive feedback K!

[JMG]

and u diss my piece when this shit is negative 5 stars ur wack kid

[The Toy Soldier]

and u diss my piece when this shit is negative 5 stars ur wack kid

look just cuz u dont like me doesnt make u right u retard maybe this shit is 15X better than the nursery ryhmes u rite byotch

[Solace]

and u diss my piece when this shit is negative 5 stars ur wack kid

too bad theres no rating system here eh

[The Toy Soldier]

and u diss my piece when this shit is negative 5 stars ur wack kid

wat fucking stars? the ones on ur head?

[Solace]

they say ima wanksta but they never stop fronting
said they goin beat my ass but they never do nothin

OH MA GOD IT ACTUALLY RHYMES. I THINK YOU COULD LEARN FROM THIS JMG.

ps. how did this fight start? oh yeah when we said it didnt rhyme so he took it too far

edit: read of bit of it, Toy Soldier, its good. keep it up

[Kosovic]

Awww this thread is a perfect example of newbie fights.

*sits and watches*

Beer anyone?

[Solace]

Awww this thread is a perfect example of newbie fights.

*sits and watches*

Beer anyone?

me. but i got my own. extras dont hurt tho

[The Toy Soldier]

Awww this thread is a perfect example of newbie fights.

*sits and watches*

Beer anyone?

wow u actually pay attention to post count i thought u were more fucked up than that kosovic

[Solace]

Toy Soldier i liked how when you rhymed sometimes it went on for a lot of lines. eg.

time to change the words
words that give a curse
looks like i cant get worse
need healin from the nurse
need to change to a new verse

i got a friend of mine
he really can unwind
lyrics are just too fine
named jesta of the crime
no time for childish ryhmes
these lyrics arent benign
these words that are my sign
to spit another line
worth more than nicks and dimes
these are what i call good times

[JMG]

we will see who ends up on top we will c

[The Toy Soldier]

we will see who ends up on top we will c

i never said i was better than you come on ur 18 and ur getting mad and causing a fret cuz i said u didnt ryhme for a lot of lines u call it an insult i call it feedback u can say my shit suks then fine say it ill just try and make it better that simple

[Kosovic]

Awww this thread is a perfect example of newbie fights.

*sits and watches*

Beer anyone?

wow u actually pay attention to post count i thought u were more fucked up than that kosovic

Not post count. Registration dates.