TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

[JMG]

I see you lookin from a distance
and if u want it come an get it
but in a couple minutes ill be runnin with it
im bringin somethin different to the supper ..wait
have an oven mit if u chose to touch tha.. plate
or just suffacate roast or fry
u can love or hate but dont deny
the skill i bring open sky's wider then they ever been
every cloud im lettin in and dressin them
the evidence goes xzabit a all the way to z
im raw as tainted meat take a free taste an see
i raise the heat to say the least
i slayed the beat with my pen and force
and 90 metaphores of course the pen is more
mighty then the sword i swept the floors
of this messege board im tr's best for sure
or atleast when it comes to multies.
oh one more thing fuck the po-lice

[Robbie G]

started off weak, got a little bit better in the middle.

The xzibit like was pretty good.

[The Toy Soldier]

why do you claim urself as trs best? thats what gets you a bad review

[Ka0t1c]

don't speak cuz im gon' be the only one left if you approach me
cuz coming closer to death you'll be going
and oh, see as fo' the multies
i am posting the best, exposing your text as phony
so yeah, you are going to wreck because you're full of bologne
while i'm showing who's next to expect cuz man, i keep growing
i won't shorten just yet, i am the bully
who's scorchin the net like Jordan cuz im the forum's new vet
while you poorly are forming good rap, your actions are corny
as my performance has yet to get slowing cuz my head is just soaring

[JMG]

i think people are just to stupid to see the compliexity thats all

[Ka0t1c]

you're still not the best at multies

but that is very great lyrics

[JMG]

hah thanks and u can be the 2nd best at multies

[Kez]

Wow you people sure have egos.

[Kosovic]

McMaybe didnt write it. Big Ax didnt write. RS didnt write it.

Sooooo....no "best lyricist" here.

[JMG]

but if they did then it would be good...but as long as i wrote it its bad

[Kosovic]

but if they did then it would be good...but as long as i wrote it its bad

Pretty much my point. Glad that we agree.

Hoces li pivu? Da li hoces moj kurac takodje?

[JMG]

thanks for clearin that up

[Kosovic]

No worries.

[4D]

Damn, that was a disappointment. I thought you were gonna display one of my uber complex multi-tastic verses or something.

As somebody already said, when you give something a title like that, you're asking for a bringing back to Earth. Especially when you can't come even close to living up to it. It's blatantly average, very weak beginning with no multie's 'til the 4th line, that's shite for someone who claims to be "The best for sure....at least at multie's", actually that's shite for a beginner. It did get a little better after the third line, with some okay multi's but absolutely nothing to write home about. The ending two lines were as bad as the poor start.

[Kosovic]

Your avatar is as gangsta as it gets.