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NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 03:35

Kosovic/
You're Such A Prick/
Is It Coz You Have A Tiny Dick/
I'm So Sick [Pause]/
Off All Of Your Shit/
Half Of This Site Hate You Ya Trick/
You Think Your "Wise Words" Are So Fuckin Slick/
You Chat All This Crap Just To Get You Kick/
It Leaves You Bouncin Up N Down Like A Po-Go Stick/
But The Rest Of Us Think You Pretty Thick/
We'd Find More Fun In An Average Brick/
Or Watchin The Burin Of A Candle Wick/
Coz You A Bent Bastard Like The Nike Tick/
And Im Gonna Hit This Queer Like A Fucking Horse Kick/

There Yuo Go, A New One You Can All Relate To (Sort Of Thing) Coz Half Of You Will Know Who, And What I'm Goin On About!!
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 06:30

Can People Comment This Plz, Need A Lil Feedbakc So I Know Where I Do Good And Do Bad (On All My Freestyles)

Thanks
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 12th, '08, 06:54

Hope this part was a joke

Kosovic/
You're Such A Prick/
Is Is Coz You Have A Tiny Dick/
I'm So Sick [Pause]/
Off All Of Your Shit/
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 06:57

Why's That??
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 12th, '08, 07:04

you had the word kosovic as one line

the rest was just too dimple
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 07:06

theres a pause after his name ;)
trust me, it fits
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby Kosovic » Jul 12th, '08, 09:22

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww for me?.....you're so sweet. :flower:
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 14:32

Kosovic wrote:Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww for me?.....you're so sweet. :flower:


No worries, Prick!
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby Nu Syd » Jul 12th, '08, 14:33

hahahahaha
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 14:41

LoL You Like??

:smoking:
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby Kosovic » Jul 12th, '08, 16:16

I am touched, i will let u see my tits if you write another diss.
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby dfg » Jul 12th, '08, 16:37

You're a dude and you have tits??
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby Kosovic » Jul 12th, '08, 16:49

dfg wrote:You're a dude and you have tits??


All mammals have breasts glans no matter gender. What were u doing in biology class? :confusion:
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby Robbie G » Jul 12th, '08, 18:23

I didn't care for it because it was so simple.

That being said for a freestyle it wasn't bad. If it was a song it would suck. :y:
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Re: NEW Freestyle - DFG - Kosovic Diss

Postby mcZu » Jul 12th, '08, 18:29

dfg wrote:Is Is Coz You Have A Tiny Dick/

Twice ''is''.... :unsure:
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