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Avoid the Fuss

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 19th, '08, 05:59

just know the cost, show a lot of soul or rot uncontrolled at your spot
how could i be my own boss if they dont let me god
all i got are haunted roads in my thoughts
building holes in my only one you brought, have i forgot?

oh im so lost at a hold n im locked from my goals
because im not fully shown for a plot
should i go back to normal
or fast forward, causin mass horror cuz my torture's nonstop

i have disorder's, in my head is the spot, i am gonna warn you
til im dead i adore the gore n guts
all because i orbit a distorted story of paranoia stuff
i enjoy it, don't toy with us

best avoid the fuss,
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Avoid the Fuss

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 19th, '08, 06:19

Kaotic wrote:just know the cost, show a lot of soul or rot uncontrolled at your spot
how could i be my own boss if they dont let me god
all i got are haunted roads in my thoughts
building holes in my only one you brought, have i forgot?

oh im so lost at a hold n im locked from my goals
because im not fully shown for a plot
should i go back to normal
or fast forward, causin mass horror cuz my torture's nonstop

i have disorder's, in my head is the spot, i am gonna warn you
til im dead i adore the gore n guts
all because i orbit a distorted story of paranoia stuff
i enjoy it, don't toy with us

best avoid the fuss,


structure is kinda weak.
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Re: Avoid the Fuss

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 19th, '08, 18:12

yeah but my excuse is i did this when i was drunk last night so i can fix this up if i like, i got my main ideas out there which was all i wanted last night so i wouldnt forget em... :whistle:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Avoid the Fuss

Postby Xray » Jul 19th, '08, 21:26

when will the ''record you lyrics" day happen? :p

cause damn you write so much but never do i hear an audio
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Re: Avoid the Fuss

Postby mcZu » Jul 19th, '08, 21:27

It's not bad for an drunk written lyric :y:
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Avoid the Fuss

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 21st, '08, 23:23

haha thanx, i wanna record so bad but nobody seems to have time for me which is FUCKING PATHETIC, I got connections with ppl in the studios and what not but with us in the Army, the only real time to do it is on the weekends so, i gotta get to annoying them... sorry guys...
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