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Freestyle

Postby Solace » Jul 27th, '08, 00:57

Yo..Dont go and mess with me,
cause im being taught by the best, so dont go testin me,
cause your skills are less,
and I smack wack rappers, run circles around theyre ass,
pulled the gun out, and it all went like BLAST,
so dont be pestin me, cause nuisance is what i kill,
and all you kill is for skill which youll never obtain,
so calm down and maintain a good heart rate,
before you do some dumbshit and get charged for rape,
and wack rappers like you are what we all really hate.

Another freestyle about my greatness :) :) :)
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Robbie G » Jul 27th, '08, 01:17

It was alright.

Rhymes were simple, no multies and you didn't say anything too unique.

That being said it was only a key-style so not bad.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Jul 27th, '08, 06:07

^
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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