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Wordplay Workout Pt.1

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Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby So AmAzIn!!! » Jul 27th, '08, 08:31

Without HALF AH DOUBT Or RANGE ROVERS I Leave Niggas "DAYS/DAZE OVER" Without PASSIN OUT!
HALF YAH HOUSE'll GET BLOWN & Leave Yah "CLIQUE/CLICK BROKE" Like i CRACKED YAH MOUSE!
WATCH IT NARC Fore GLOCK AH SPARK
& Be LIFTIN YAH OUT... u Praly Got Ah 'DICK IN YAH MOUTH' If You's "TALKIN HARD"!
STOP IT TARD! If You Got Those TYPE OF GUNS Only Time "I'LL/ISLE RUN" Is SHOPPIN CARTS!
DOUBT YOU FEARED So NOW YOU SCARED When We SHOUT AH BLARE... Cous
We Got Them STEAL GLOCK So When "WE'LL/WHEEL POP" Dun Be Surprised If You "OUTTA AIR"!
(Da Fuck? lol)
THEY HATIN? SEND IT Cause THEY AINT GON END IT Cous
My Dudes? Cant PLAY EM OVER Cous Yah "GAMES IS OVER" Like Yah PLAYSTATIONS RENTED!
These DUDES OLDER & Yah "CREW'S/CRUISE OVER" Like Yah VACATION's ENDED!

(Whos Tha Boi?) ......... :o ........ So AmAzIn!!! ...... Think About Everything lol ..... Not About Anything Just Writing Cause Its 4:30 An Nothin To Do lol ...... So I Barely Tryedlol
(whos tha boi?) ..... :o ............ So AmAzIn!!! Aka Yah Boi
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby So AmAzIn!!! » Jul 27th, '08, 14:16

Man.... (This Peice Of Work Was What?) ............... :o .............. So AmAzIn!!!
(whos tha boi?) ..... :o ............ So AmAzIn!!! Aka Yah Boi
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby Xray » Jul 27th, '08, 15:11

So AmAzIn!!! wrote:Man.... (This Peice Of Work Was What?) ............... :o .............. So AmAzIn!!!

damn you got a BIIIGGGGGGGGGGG ASSSSSSSSS EGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOO

lil wayne fan?
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby So AmAzIn!!! » Jul 27th, '08, 15:34

Lol Nawww^ ....... Lil Wayne Aint My Top 5 .... My Top 10 ..... My Top 50 ...... Lol Dude Aint Bein Listened Too :wave:
(whos tha boi?) ..... :o ............ So AmAzIn!!! Aka Yah Boi
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 27th, '08, 16:30

reminds me of j-roc
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 27th, '08, 16:48

DelinQuent wrote:reminds me of j-roc



it is j-roc.
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby mcZu » Jul 27th, '08, 17:14

Do you really need to hit capslock when you write down a pun or something.....
It isn't bad, some wordplay is good.. not all...
Not bad..
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 1st, '08, 03:29

its clever but u do have to work on a few things... still pretty good id listen to it ...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 19th, '08, 21:46

McMaybe wrote:That sucked donkey ass.


Lmao If Anybody Needed To Know Tha Definition Of Ah Hater^ ...... Hiiii :wave:
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 19th, '08, 21:54

Ohh... Too Bad u Can't Then^ ;)
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 19th, '08, 22:01

Lol I Am Him .... TR Never Answered My PM For Ah Name Change Lol .... lmao @ 'Ride Him' ..... Basically ... Jroc > Chet .... Lets Hope u Can Read That :D :whistle:

& @ MCMAYBE ..... Lol I'm Better Then u Too Lol ..... Punchlines .... Wordplay ..... Pick 1 ... & Im Above u On It .......
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 19th, '08, 22:19

& @ MCMAYBE ..... Lol I'm Better Then u Too Lol

LOL
dude you can write so many multis to leave pun's head spinnin
but no one has ever heard an audio out of you

so by you even talkin to mcmaybe is disrespectful

fuck you homie
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 19th, '08, 22:27

sticcy z wrote:
& @ MCMAYBE ..... Lol I'm Better Then u Too Lol

LOL
dude you can write so many multis to leave pun's head spinnin

Thanks :D

sticcy z wrote:but no one has ever heard an audio out of you

so by you even talkin to mcmaybe is disrespectful

fuck you homie


Lol I Havent Read/Heard 1 Bar By Maybe ... That Made Me Say "Damn!" ..... Or Even Close ... He Aint Crazy With It.... @ All lol ...... He's Ok With Topics I Guess ... But, He Can't Point Tha Finger .... At Ah Dude That Dosent Try On This Site ... & Say His Lyrics Suck lol ... My Thoughts Anyways .... Maybe Wack Kids Can Tell People Better Then Them They Suck ... & It Not Be Hating .... I Dont Know .. Lol u Tell Me :zipped:
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 19th, '08, 22:38

Lol I Havent Read/Heard 1 Bar By Maybe ... That Made Me Say "Damn!" ..... Or Even Close ... He Aint Crazy With It.... @ All lol ...... He's Ok With Topics I Guess ... But, He Can't Point Tha Finger .... At Ah Dude That Dosent Try On This Site ... & Say His Lyrics Suck lol ... My Thoughts Anyways .... Maybe Wack Kids Can Tell People Better Then Them They Suck ... & It Not Be Hating .... I Dont Know .. Lol u Tell Me

dude lol your funny
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 19th, '08, 22:43

Haha i Know :D
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