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next song 'in the hood'

Postby hoodkilla » Jul 28th, '08, 21:13

sitin in my car
in the hood
livin with drugs
in the hood
fucking hoodrats
in the hood

^^^^ chorus right there

first verse

i kill rhymes like i kill lines
coke lines that is combined with heroine lines
and guns i own em
girls i show em to em
they get scared when they fuck with tha kid
cus when i bust my nut they think its a bullit
lemme smoke my chronic
drink my henny and live my life
let me freestyle to nas
and 50 cent to show yall my skills
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby Robbie G » Jul 28th, '08, 21:26

:unsure:

Hi.....?
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby Emadyville » Jul 28th, '08, 23:14

Bad first post...and welcome to tr
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby hoodkilla » Jul 29th, '08, 09:24

no one else?
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 29th, '08, 15:21

terrible honestly terrible, but writing, bad concept, un creative, honeslty why go along with bullshit gangsta rap ?
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby hoodkilla » Jul 29th, '08, 17:01

k thanks

anyone else?
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby SkinNBlista » Jul 29th, '08, 23:42

waddup tho...
welcome to cyberspace :wave:
Whateva u wanna say, go ahead coz we dont play.
Every word taken to heart, supersensitive, arent u smart.
So how next r u gonna use it, laugh in my face is to abuse it.
Remember me G, coz i'm gonna live til I'm an OAP.
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 30th, '08, 01:45

meh it alright
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 30th, '08, 02:41

it is crap and u know it
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 30th, '08, 04:06

Kaotic wrote:it is crap and u know it

it aint THAT bad
its even worse
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 30th, '08, 10:19

The Toy Soldier wrote:
Kaotic wrote:it is crap and u know it

it aint THAT bad
its even worse
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby hoodkilla » Jul 30th, '08, 10:50

if your so good why dont we battle then
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby Nu Syd » Jul 30th, '08, 11:36

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:terrible honestly terrible, but writing, bad concept, un creative, honeslty why go along with bullshit gangsta rap ?


what he said :zipped:
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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby Xray » Jul 30th, '08, 13:39

they get scared when they fuck with tha kid
cus when i bust my nut they think its a bullit

not bad, but i can't judge on the concept cause i don't know you, but if you are packing heat than thats real :b: but if not, don't wanna be an ass but if your not packing heat or nothing than your a gimmick thats lost in the rap game by lost i mean, don't know what to write about.
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I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: next song 'in the hood'

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 30th, '08, 14:59

Xray wrote:
they get scared when they fuck with tha kid
cus when i bust my nut they think its a bullit

not bad, but i can't judge on the concept cause i don't know you, but if you are packing heat than thats real :b: but if not, don't wanna be an ass but if your not packing heat or nothing than your a gimmick thats lost in the rap game by lost i mean, don't know what to write about.


Well said Xray. :y:
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