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i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 1st, '08, 23:56

scattered inside of my head there are thoughts unsaid which i've meant to be read
but am i mentally fed with whats entering instead by the intentions from the undead?
i get mixed up, all my senses seem led by a different demension, i guess im demented
but the demons been spreadin false wisdom, my tread's almost bald
it isnt really that bad at all but still could i add anything, if u would listen
my sadness should end and i'd act glad
how does these doubts even find a vision to the rest, to imprint just a lil bit of a threat
many wont call their selves missin but now im gettin better detectin wherever the devil does set...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Emadyville » Aug 2nd, '08, 01:29

Ha not bad for being drunk.
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 2nd, '08, 07:07

your not drunk drunk people don't post on forums dude but i know ur just messing around with the whole drunk thing.
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 2nd, '08, 08:08

The Toy Soldier wrote:your not drunk drunk people don't post on forums dude but i know ur just messing around with the whole drunk thing.

how do you know...he could be a mass murderer for all we know
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 2nd, '08, 08:20

sticcy z wrote:
The Toy Soldier wrote:your not drunk drunk people don't post on forums dude but i know ur just messing around with the whole drunk thing.

how do you know...he could be a mass murderer for all we know

hes not drunk i know what I m telling you, its like me coming on here saying im high when i could just be some fag ass poser. he aint drunk drunk people dont go on forums (yes i said dont not i dont think i said DONT) and if he was intoxicated hes got better things to do than spit a 5 line freestyle.

On topic its pretty nice though.
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Aug 2nd, '08, 08:31

The Toy Soldier wrote:
sticcy z wrote:
The Toy Soldier wrote:your not drunk drunk people don't post on forums dude but i know ur just messing around with the whole drunk thing.

how do you know...he could be a mass murderer for all we know

hes not drunk i know what I m telling you, its like me coming on here saying im high when i could just be some fag ass poser. he aint drunk drunk people dont go on forums (yes i said dont not i dont think i said DONT) and if he was intoxicated hes got better things to do than spit a 5 line freestyle.

On topic its pretty nice though.


I got wasted and went on a forum once, so I win.
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 3rd, '08, 09:15

Cwayon_Murder wrote:
I got wasted and went on a forum once, so I win.

no you didn't
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 3rd, '08, 20:51

yes, i really was drunk, i typed it pretty good too i see!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Aug 4th, '08, 04:23

The Toy Soldier wrote:
Cwayon_Murder wrote:
I got wasted and went on a forum once, so I win.

no you didn't


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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Xray » Aug 4th, '08, 09:20

seems like people are getting the wrong ideas here. when is it cool to write lyrics when your drunk? bizzare is bizzare, so find yourself a new idea other than trying to write retarted lyrics. no hate at all, just setting you straight.

for real, drunk lyrics don't impress me. we need the old Kaotic back. where you concentrated as a normal person to write your thoughts. not this, im training to earn a spot in the drunk writing olympics contest. take this as a hint and concentrate 100% on your next drop homie cause by posts like this your only decreasing the respect for the people on this site that have for you :y:

you welcome. :smoking:
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 5th, '08, 21:17

Xray wrote:seems like people are getting the wrong ideas here. when is it cool to write lyrics when your drunk? bizzare is bizzare, so find yourself a new idea other than trying to write retarted lyrics. no hate at all, just setting you straight.

for real, drunk lyrics don't impress me. we need the old Kaotic back. where you concentrated as a normal person to write your thoughts. not this, im training to earn a spot in the drunk writing olympics contest. take this as a hint and concentrate 100% on your next drop homie cause by posts like this your only decreasing the respect for the people on this site that have for you :y:

you welcome. :smoking:

he aint drunk
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Re: i figured hey, im drunk, so whatever here i am

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 5th, '08, 22:17

y would u hate that and not accept it for what this piece is...? btw i got great stuff to show u but i am using my ps3 now
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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