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LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 7th, '08, 09:56

I'be been meanin to write a new verse for ages but i got my catalyst from a brother on da site.
neways here goes...


let us just stop for a moment and then just pretend,
for a second think of this, as the begining of the end,
every metaphores been hoared and all flow tactics spent,
i've been writing so long, its as tho my backbones bent,
i feel like an eagle when it gives its first big screech,
me postin a new verse, is like how 2 old friends greet,but,
ya'll teased me when i was silent, and just called me weak,
Ya'll just scared , cause its ironic how my silence speaks,
But i'm thru with all dem bitches and dem big boi mansions,
i've got my glock locked and loaded fo' sum serious action,
cause i'm a maddened hassasin,spitin rhymes wid passion,
waitin for ma call , wen i take over from- Bin laden, (haha)
my country's dividing,administrations a buncha suck up
the whole nations crying,and what are these signs implying?
the governments been lying,we sold "US" to the devil , now
innocent lives is dying, public frustrations at its peak,
is that why the numbers for suicide bombings are rising??
Its time for "US" to fight back and do a new WU TANG
use our damned brains and take that bar to a new plane
F-17's aint enough so we start makin our own range
so we never bow down and never resort to loose change!


I'MM BAACCCKK ,umm a few notes:

Hassasin:Ancient arabs were not only knonwed for their brutal killing but also for their drug induced stupors.the drug of their choice was a potent intoxicant known as Hashish aka hash.As their notority spread they started to be knwon by a single word-hassasin.its synonymous with killing in every lanuguage, the term that compliments hassasin in english is "ASSASSIN"

F-17- Pakistan and China together manufacter a plane in the class of an F-16 known as F-17

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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby notoriouS-K-M » Aug 8th, '08, 11:58

Wow dude lt's been a long time since you've written anything.It's awesome. I liked some of the references you made and how you kept to the point. AND it flowed quite well. So for me it would be a 9.5/10 easy.
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 8th, '08, 12:17

thanks alot for the review brother,i reali appreciate it
MORE REVIEWS PLEASE!! :flower:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Robbie G » Aug 8th, '08, 14:59

Good stuff man drop more often. :y:
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 8th, '08, 19:21

lol,i've been meanin 2 for ages now but pharmacies taken its toll on ma free time ,but i'm do my best,plus i'll put up my next drop in a week or so..
Thanks for the review,Appreciate it
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Xray » Aug 9th, '08, 01:47

the structure is superb :y:

rhymes are good, flow is good too. nice piece and welcome back in this bitch :smoking:
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 9th, '08, 20:39

well I"M HOME LIKE A MOTHERFUKCER :worship: :b:
thnx alot bro,comin from you this is huge,your opinion is highly respected man.
this is just the beginning,wait for my next drop,its higly political,just so that the world knows the type of shit my country is in :smoking: .
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 9th, '08, 21:02

I don't even gotta tell you how sick this is, haha. Really good shit man.
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 9th, '08, 21:41

yur definitly improving... keep at it yur developing that flow that has something to say :y:
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 11th, '08, 12:36

HAHA :smoking:
@steve: all thanks to you brother,i changed the last part into some i had been thinkin on for the last 2-3 days,mad props :y:
@rain: MATRIX IN DA HOUUUSSSEE!!! thanx alot for chekin out my drop,a good review from you is HUGE man,huge props
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 13th, '08, 09:19

B.U.M.P :shifty:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby SajN » Aug 13th, '08, 19:11

Welcome Back!


Good drop man. Nice rhymes and good flow :y:
Really good shit!

Keep It Up :y:
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Re: LOOSE CHANGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 13th, '08, 19:20

Thanks alot for your review bro,i really appriciate it
take some time out to read my latest,its called "MY MESSAGE"
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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