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Since You've Been Gone

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Since You've Been Gone

Postby ilovemeghan » Aug 12th, '08, 18:57

I haven’t made you a little rap in a while
But your face, I aint even seen that for a while
When you’re gone, I feel so trapped in a tile
I don’t want this; I want to be trapped in your smile
Since you’ve been gone, all can do is sit and I cry
Looking at our photos, I reminisce and I cry
I need to be a man, and believe me I try
But I can’t stop crying, I need you here to dry my eyes
I can’t do this without you I need you to be my guide
I can’t see things without you, without you I’m just blind
Since you’ve been gone, I’ve felt so empty inside
I need you right here by my side, I need that little kiss
That reminds me you’re here, all these things that I miss
I need the cuddles and the feeling I get we reminisce
Believe my sadness baby, I’ve never felt like this
Oh baby, baby since you’ve been gone...

I’m sitting here waiting to rejoice
Waiting for the moment I hear the sound of your voice
I’m waiting to smile
Coz I aint seen you for a while
Baby hurry on home
Cause I’m feeling so alone
Oh baby, baby since you’ve been gone

Sitting with you laughing and watching a film
Cuddling and kissing, not really watching the film
Talking and smiling, and fighting each other gently
With another girl I’ve never quite been so friendly
Baby I miss this, you’ve been taken away
All I have is memories, and I’m forsaken today
I know, I know I’m gonna see you in only a few days
But I’m still going crazy; this is love, not a phase
I miss you so bad and I miss you so much
I feeling so sad, I wanna kiss you so much
I’m crying as I write this, that’s how much you mean to me
If only you could know how lonely I seem to be
I’m feeling so empty, because we can’t even talk
But without you here with me baby I can’t even walk
I think I hear you up in here, I light up and I look
Then I remember you’re gone, and my soul you done took
Oh baby, baby since you’ve been gone...

I’m sitting here waiting to rejoice
Waiting for the moment I hear the sound of your voice
I’m waiting to smile
Coz I aint seen you for a while
Baby hurry on home
Cause I’m feeling so alone
Oh baby, baby since you’ve been gone

I’ve gotta be a man, and I’ve gotta stay strong
I gotta dry my eyes, I gotta prove myself wrong
And believe I can do it; I can get myself through it
And think that when I see you, it’ll be back to how I once knew it
All the times we kissed, all the moments we hugged
All the fun we had, and all the times that we loved
All films that we watched, all the love that we had
All the arguments that we squashed; all the hugs that we had
All these special things, I gotta remember, are coming back
So all I gotta do for myself baby, is sit back and relax
I’m here waiting for you baby, to place you in my arms
I know I’d meet death, before I’d ever let you meet harm
Baby hurry back coz I miss you so much
Oh baby, baby since you’ve been gone...

I’m sitting here waiting to rejoice
Waiting for the moment I hear the sound of your voice
I’m waiting to smile
Coz I aint seen you for a while
Baby hurry on home
Cause I’m feeling so alone
Oh baby, baby since you’ve been gone
Where you at man?
Let me see them hands in the sky
Detroit Motherfuckers 'till we die
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Re: Since You've Been Gone

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 12th, '08, 21:46

are u sure you're a man?! haha, u neede to man up a bit it sounds like but you got some potential with your words, i would spice it up a lil bit more to find different words that have the same meaning otherwise to me, the words are too over used. but its still pretty good... but you need to stand out more and toughen up! :smoking:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Since You've Been Gone

Postby SkinNBlista » Aug 12th, '08, 22:25

ewwwwww soppy git :p
Whateva u wanna say, go ahead coz we dont play.
Every word taken to heart, supersensitive, arent u smart.
So how next r u gonna use it, laugh in my face is to abuse it.
Remember me G, coz i'm gonna live til I'm an OAP.
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