Eye Of The Storm (Modified)

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 15th, '08, 00:25

im outta the norm and there's no doubt about it
im in the eye of the storm cuz my own fault's surrounded
myself to be swarmed, i'm goin down, who's countin
my shouts are ignored, i'm bound to start drownin

they thought i was warned, now torn apart i'm found and
my heart has got warped, it sounds i am bounded
to my realm that's been formed, my boundaries are crowded
so i melt to the floor, resultin in an adult who has fallin
short cuz my help's not around and i've dealt with before
my hell of some sort

should i challenge the court when their power is more
i'm insulted, growin sour n sore, i'm poutin
i'm pourin a fountain, what for, cuz my talent's brought war
to the ground which supports the rounds in this astoundin
blood sport, i'm unproud to report, now feelin unbalanced
because what seems it's unreal i have brought in
i deal with a lot n i see i'm psychotic, restore me, Kaotic
my story's off topic, all the glory's from gossip
save me before i'm tranforming to the Joker of Gotham
i'm cornered n haunted

by **Emadyville** » Aug 15th, '08, 02:47

Not bad, but you've had much better.

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 15th, '08, 03:00

that's alright, at least im still writin some solid rhymes

by **Emadyville** » Aug 15th, '08, 03:06

Yeah I mean the first 4 lines I liked, the rest, especially the last lines were just too simple compared to what you normally write.

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 15th, '08, 03:09

well, yeah, i did write that up pretty fast but i like em enough to post em here so u know where im at

by **The Toy Soldier** » Aug 15th, '08, 03:14

your posting too much, waaaaaaay too much in this forum what you need to do is get all of the lyricism that you made in all of those smal ltopics fuse em together and then post cuz thatll be better than small ones.

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 15th, '08, 08:23

i dunno if i can do that yet

by **Arabian Shady** » Aug 15th, '08, 10:44

its pretty different from what you used to write a couple months ago, i must say that half of your stuff has reali good multis,probably cause of the exercise you've been puttin on, but on comparing this to your old drops this aint exactly what your capabale of :flower: