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been a long time since i wrote here

Postby blitches » Aug 16th, '08, 09:53

welcome back, hell's come back
off the chains loss off brains got my coffin stained
lost in a holocaustic version of bostin, spitten wit hitler
santas my dj i dont speak direct i speak in replays
dick realisin heat waves i keep goin even if the beat fades
school remindin me of street dayz, those tha days
but i gotta go away, got more hos to play, vocals to lay
to bold to stray off the path, steady head even when im zoned from grass
word is bond heard a song hurt my arm turned it wrong
burnin bongs, radios right there bitch turn it on
dont know how much coke im on thought i heard a gong
but it was just a toad
open ya mouth im finna bust a load
fuck the dough, i aint rappin for finances
i heard my shit was so ill that it could cure my cancer.
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Re: been a long time since i wrote here

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 16th, '08, 16:04

no, but theres potential
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: been a long time since i wrote here

Postby Emadyville » Aug 16th, '08, 16:20

Kaotic wrote:no, but theres potential


Agreed.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: been a long time since i wrote here

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 16th, '08, 16:45

Emadyville wrote:
Kaotic wrote:no, but theres potential


Agreed.

double agreed flow is horrible well how i read it it was
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Re: been a long time since i wrote here

Postby blitches » Aug 16th, '08, 19:54

i wrote it to like 3 different beats so i know it sounds everywhere
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Re: been a long time since i wrote here

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 16th, '08, 21:07

blitches wrote:i wrote it to like 3 different beats so i know it sounds everywhere

that isnt the point itas too simple not the best creativity i can think of three beats myself and it still flows bad
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