what the fuck do you expect?

[The Toy Soldier]

first we get in a fight and then we make up/
yet again ur all bitchy like what the fuck?/
bitch you get all pissy and then you try to diss me/
don't try to take your period out on this emcee!/
cuz bitch see i don't like you no one else does/
you childish bitch just let it go dont make a fuss/
i aint violent yet i dont want to be so dont make me cuss/
because even if we were good friends,means nothing now ill break our trust/
you want something you cnt have which is popularity i know you crave it you lust/
but ur bust girl ur nothing useless than rust on iron, old not fresh like me just some speck of dust/
but if indeed you must insist to have me desist this diss to you and have me go bliss, then so be it bitch/
dont get all mad cuz what i say is the truth fuck it you can knock out my tooth/
cuz if ur that mad it only fuels me when know that i got to you/
fuck it make it to ur boiling point i want red not blue/
hell get your friends ur crew you can jump me after school!/
cuz il lawlays be top dog bitch play ur postition and ill play mine/
dont forget who owns you so dont fucking step out of line!/

Im really fucking angry from two arguments I had to day. One with my mom and one with this one other chick and I thought I would do what you guys said on relating, we have all experienced a big rush of rage (I think).

[Emadyville]

Wasn't bad, seemed like you just wrote it real fast, good emotion, could tell u were pissed the fuck off lol.

[Robbie G]

Not sure why but it reminded me of Eminems flow/song's on infinite.

[Solace]

I liked it man, but a little hard to read.

Yeah, we all have arguemets. Thanks for sharing

[Arabian Shady]

lol that was a good way to pen it down, the period line was funny, but you might wana keep your structure intact, every bar just kept increasing in length,
your improving
Peace

[The Toy Soldier]

Thanks Guys!

Not sure why but it reminded me of Eminems flow/song's on infinite.

Album=Favorite the flow on Infinite is remarkable to me, I did listen to Jealousy Woes II to get you know, the like how do you say it, atmosphere of the anger put on around you.