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MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 20th, '08, 17:43

After touching a political subject and a comback verse i kept thinkin about what to write on, u know ,something that was truly unique in itself yet every one could relate to, i had been workin on this ever since my last drop was POSTED,lol . any ways i hope ya'll like it :flower:


here goes:



Does the success of MY MESSAGE prove I've popped the bubble?
if the words have been delivered, is my world now free from trouble?
every rhyme that i had posted and every syllable that you mumbled
is just the apex of what awaits you, just the tip of my inner strrugles
if i doubt the topics that i write on, does it mean that i should'nt post
if i stay away from the lime light , is that being humble or gettin broke
So if i'm representing a muslim nation,will all my readers have a stroke?
will they uphold that racial prejudice and stop showin their support?
Should i agree with all the others and hope Bin Laden gets captured
or cuss that,democracy is a book,that needs "An end of Chapter"
Does living on these sand dunes,mean i cant have swagger, or
should i plot MY foiled assasination, to have ya'll see me as a rapper?
Does being a virgin till i'm married, equal facing ridicule by my peers
Or is MY afterlife just really worth it, FUCK'EM if they thinking that i'm queer
is it wrong i'm on the poster, taking time to correct YOUR fears,is it
right that as a muslim, i took the first step to bring YA'LL near?
these question knock for answers, is there a way to open this DOOR
is it REALLY wrong that I'm afraid, of NOT being afraid anymore?
If this is a subject that Ya'll relate to, can we use as a force, to
cross this subtle threshold, or better yet,just change to another FLOOR


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"I'm on the poster...": I felt that some people sorta think that i rap exclusively about islam or the light of muslims,i just rap about that to bring it to your notice, you allready know all of this, i'm just shedding a new light on it
"Cross this subtle..":umm this was like a way of expressing that we should all understand such problem and try and solve them together.

the basic idea behind it is pretty simple, i wrote about what i think about subconsiously,something that my MIND asks ITSELF,ne ways i hope ya'll can relate to this and give me ANY SORT of feedback,lol
thnx a lot :worship:
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ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Robbie G » Aug 20th, '08, 23:03

Really good man keep doing stuff like this it's unique.
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby SkinNBlista » Aug 21st, '08, 02:08

Good follow up to the first post,
the language was more figurative I think.
You are indeed gifted in putting your emotion
and feelings across universally...

U got a gift, dont hide it, use it to bring your points
to the world, there might not be east coast west coast
beef any more but there is certainly a worldwide
struggle against oppression, I dont live this way
because i live in Ireland, so it aint my bag, but i certainly
feel ya dog, the bigger the struggle the greater the reward
its a divine rule.

So you got my support, bring it on :y:
Whateva u wanna say, go ahead coz we dont play.
Every word taken to heart, supersensitive, arent u smart.
So how next r u gonna use it, laugh in my face is to abuse it.
Remember me G, coz i'm gonna live til I'm an OAP.
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 21st, '08, 03:30

awesome! A+!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 21st, '08, 10:07

:worship: :worship: :worship:
@ Shadie Babie: thnx alot for takin some time out to read this, you were one of the first few to repsond wen i STARTED posting, so thnx a lot for doin that :8)
@ SkinNBlista: i'm reali glad you feel that way, Its a reali big deal for me that ppl from all around the wrold read this and UNDERSTAND what I try to say, probably cause my main aim is to finish differences where ever possible, also thank you for takin time out to read this :flower:
@ Kaotic: Thnx alot man, its huge comin from you, probably cause you rarely review other people's work :whistle: but mad props for makin an exeption :y:
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Peace :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby SajN » Aug 21st, '08, 18:18

Agree wit everyone man!

It's a great piece, very nice lyrics.
If I had to write what's good, I had to repeat what everyone else said, so you know what I mean :happy:


Good Job :y:
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 21st, '08, 19:04

Dope, dope, dope.
You already know what I think, haha.

Keep it up man :y:
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 21st, '08, 19:20

I'M FEELIN SKY HIGH AT THE MO' PPL :worship: :worship:
@ McMaybe: mad props for the review man, a TEN comin from you is like huge for me..reali reali appreicate it :8)
@ The Infection: Again thnx for your time basically and its kool about the short post, you writin a yes it enough bro,lol
@ Steve: lol i just wanted you to write it here, boosts ma rep man,ppl say "HOLY SHIT DUDE,STEVE CHECKED THAT ARABIAN DUDE POST MAN!!" hahahaha, but thnx anyways :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 21st, '08, 19:25

Arabian Shady wrote:I'M FEELIN SKY HIGH AT THE MO' PPL :worship: :worship:
@ McMaybe: mad props for the review man, a TEN comin from you is like huge for me..reali reali appreicate it :8)
@ The Infection: Again thnx for your time basically and its kool about the short post, you writin a yes it enough bro,lol
@ Steve: lol i just wanted you to write it here, boosts ma rep man,ppl say "HOLY SHIT DUDE,STEVE CHECKED THAT ARABIAN DUDE POST MAN!!" hahahaha, but thnx anyways :b:
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Peace

Haha, my bad man, I smoked a little today, wans't thinkin' straight, lmao.

"that whole peice is sooo fuckin' dope. the flow was intense, your vocab was extraordinary, and your multies and shit were just plain sick, lol. really strong peice there man, one of your best for sure. the whole messege is just crazy, you really know how to get that across..."

Steve Spag supports Arabian Shady all the way, and anybody who don't, just don't know talent, lol.
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 21st, '08, 19:49

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
@ Steve: dude its all kool, thnx for the support, makes me feel like the arabian obama,lmfao!!!
@ Chet: mad props for chekin it out man, your wellcome to rent my brain out but i aint givin it to ya,lol, i reali appreciate your review :y:
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Peace :b:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 22nd, '08, 04:21

dont get me wrong, i read ppl's work and urs deserves a lot of attention!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 22nd, '08, 08:51

:worship: :worship: :worship:
Mad props FOR the attention,thnx a lot bro
Peace :b:

oh MORE REVIEW'S PPL!!......Damn allmost forgot :smoking:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Xray » Aug 22nd, '08, 10:15

yeah like what maybe said. poetic as fuck man. holy shit man this has got to be your best post so far. one of the greatest posts I've seen on this site. the fucking flow damn its just perfect! :o the structure is outrageous for real. keep this up, and Ima end up in a hospital suffering a heart attack :unsure:

PS: can you be my ghost writer? :o
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 22nd, '08, 15:32

"SOMEBODY DIAL 911!!!!!!" man i aint stoppin this, i got loadsa ideas, its best you invest in a nebulizer or sumthing to keep your breath stable, :p :smoking:
thnx for checkin it out and for the review as well,
MORE REVIEW'S PPL!!!!! :worship:
Peace :b:

P.S: A-day All day man, just hit me wen you need me :8)
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 22nd, '08, 21:11

who needs a breathing treatment what did I miss :unsure:

yo man I'm glad u got at me to peep this it was worth it keep it up
yur becoming more orginal everytime u post one
so keep posting um :y:
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