vision of the dead

[enjinn]

ima seer of the unknown, lighting up the shadows
Fuck bones, im striking at your marrow, strike it with an arrow
A psychic in a castle, i placed god on his feet
I conquer the beast, deceived by clones you thought it was me
The forrest i see, are heavy with corpses
Im ready and thoughtless, sever your spine, leave the head with your daughters
Im kept in a fortress, gaurded by the darkest demons
I mark the heathens, ressurect victims leave their carcass screaming
I created the void, gave it a noise, changing its voice
Mundane is inevitable, sacred is choice
The chosen listen to my words
MY vision is absurd, with alien codes hidden in my verse
I'll hit you with a curse, send your soul into hell
I'm focusing well, im the demon that became holy and fell
I'm linked to the base, all thinking would fade
If i didnt grab my pen and put this ink to the page

[Shady's_Back]

Don't know much about giving constructive feedback but I read that through and it sounded sweet! Nice one

[Slim Zaddy]

well nic eone though

[Ka0t1c]

pretty clever, i like the way you think

[enjinn]

thanks a lot for the comments...i really appreciate it

[Slim Zaddy]

ya it's a nice one .. good flow .. keep it up