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Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 28th, '08, 11:21

A couple of days ago there was a big bomb blast in palestine which killed around 25 people and there was another blast in iraq which killed a U.S. Soldier,but my local newspaper made the front page with MASSIVE reports about how the blast happnd and how the number of U.S soldiers dyin in Iraq has been escalatin, but there was a 2*2 colomn in the baCK SKIMMIN through the blast about the Blast in Palestine.Thats when i started writing this

HERE GOES:

My potrayal of YOUR world initiates massive sales of Blue Rays
I aint Two Shades,yet these key strokes make points in new ways
Beheading's and Big bombs aint enough to keep safe,this shit is a
new take on Our world, and those who aint afraid to make graves
mass destruction and blood stains made headlines when fate played,
trust left and blame stayed, when the death toll rose and claimed
stage.Shit hit face when sandy terrains shook the whole world and
boasted that,death had signed names on the steel hull of the 2 planes
Big minds asked "WHY" so Ya'll straightaway used muscle over brain,
memories are but some remains,my apoplogies to Ya'll can never make
it same,So seek solace in MY rhymes , pass it around share my flame
Trust me, I know, nuthing brings people together like Death and Pain
We all on the same page, yet we're standing apart on different lines'
so when we face rage, ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
shit is BACKSTAGE,cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
This aint another plea or yet another call for help,with what we've dealt with
beggin aint our cup of tea,This is the First Aid for all ,whose hearts' melt
and those whose minds dwell for justice when they see us on the T.V,
so the next time some of yours die give some thought to ours,think about
how many of us died during OUR war's,THIS isnt a game i'm playin,I aint
tryin to raise the bar, my intent is not antagonise, just to heal some scars


some notes:
those... Make Graves:terrorists
Mass destruction...2 planes:about sept 11,also the term sandy terrains is reference to the TALEBAN
50 years..: palestine and Kashmir have been fighting their respective wars since 50 years..

TEAR MY VERSE DOWN,CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS WELLCOME :worship:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 28th, '08, 23:55

i think it's awesome, great vocab, overall this is a nice piece, definitely worth keeping :y: :y:



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doesnt need much if any, to touch up on
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 29th, '08, 14:30

MAD FUKIN PROPS DUDE!!! :worship: :worship:
thnx alot for the review and for appreciating the content, i was a little apprehensive about the the readers response..lol
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby SajN » Aug 31st, '08, 14:18

The best piece I've seen from you imo!

You have some pretty good/nice rhymes. Serious lyrics, so that's good!
Plus the flow is dope.


Great job man!

Best piece I've seen from you.
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Postby Steve Spag » Aug 31st, '08, 17:45

Crazy drop here, lol. Your shit is always on-point, you know exactly what you wanna say, and you get it across with ease. Your vocab. is always impressive, and your flow was sick aswell.

As usual, another dope drop.
Keep it up man :y:
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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 31st, '08, 19:15

:worship: :worship: this shit is extra fly :worship: :worship:
@McMaybe: I am indeed humbled by your review, believe it or not my efforts look worthwhile when i get a response by some one like you, thnx a bunch bro :y:
@The Infection: dude i'm feelin high at the moment man,mad props for chekin it out and 7 up for the review,lol
@Steve: Dude its all guidance man,thnx for being the strong pillar that you are,I am in debt :flower: I included the last line to rectify the flow problems,glad that shit worked out
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 1st, '08, 01:53

Wow man, you're a true lyricist. I actually think you can make a living of writing. Now I don't mean like just a rapper, but for newspapers and stuff like that, you know. You got a great vocabulary and you seem to always know how to structure your lines and in an intelligent way point out exactly what you want to be said. Some awesome rhymes in there with a very, very great topic and concept.

Mad fucking props on this one. :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 1st, '08, 07:14

lolol :worship:
i woudnt say true lyricist man, but thnx anyways.haha glad you liked the drop and i appreciate the kind words as well :flower:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby The Toy Soldier » Sep 1st, '08, 07:18

holy shit

this is horrible

in a good fucknig way man you fucking lyrically owned it man.
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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 1st, '08, 07:20

damn dude , you shocked me for a while, lol
thnx alot for checkin it out :worship:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 1st, '08, 09:53

ya i have looked at it .. honestly it's a good piece of writing :y: good luck bro
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Postby Xray » Sep 1st, '08, 10:13

yeah man i agree with everyone else, crazy motherfucken drop :b: complex is OUT THE ROOF!

We all on the same page, yet we're standing apart on different lines'
so when we face rage, ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Solace » Sep 1st, '08, 16:21

The Toy Soldier wrote:holy shit

this is horrible

in a good fucknig way man you fucking lyrically owned it man.

LMAO when i read that i was like WHAT THE FUCK..Oh...

Anyways Arabian Shady, that was an awesome verse! Very meaningful. I like how you wrote about something happening in real life, a real national issue, if you know what i mean. You should be proud, its awesome, and everyone else thinks so too :y:
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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 2nd, '08, 08:53

:worship: i'm soo high, i feel dizzy , lol :worship:

@z_em: thnx alot man, glad you took time to check this out :y:
@ X: dude i thought you was dead or sumthing cause you didnt hit me with a review but now that you have thnx a lot man, its allways good to hear a positive review from you,sick stuff bro, :worship:
@ Shadymademe: i was shocked as well man, but its all kool, i'm glad you reali liked it, the reason i started writing about stuff like this was because ppll seemed to have this stereotype that ALL of us were terrorists, or ALL of us were ruthless and prejudiced against america,you know stuff like that.And i was like the only way these two worlds relate are thru music and i just focused on that,
basically my AIM: to finish negative menatlity against each other whereva possible,so its feel like a million bucks when ppl like you come up and appreciate it and understand the message. for that i THANK YOU :flower:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: FRONT PAGE

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 3rd, '08, 19:58

B.U.M.P. :shifty:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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