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Faced In problems + done writing

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Sep 6th, '08, 07:17

Gimme a reason why i shouldnt be brutal
Me trying to be civil is running in a circle
Wish i could cancel my fucking ass candle
Im sick and tired of sounding dumb & dull
Im sick of this cycle when can we be equal
have fun even maybe play around an doodle
I keep saying its crucial that i be damn cruel
cant be equal cause wed need another double
thatd never work my double would bring trouble
and fumble each time when he would go global
I'm all fragile never did go forceful im to respectful
Im thankful for being evil ill accept any fucking duel
I think im just too cruel fuck you for being doubtful
got a problem dial me or just let me watch you crumble
Im just tired of hearing that my raps are awful doubtful
told ya i wanted them fuels you best start bein careful

I wana own a castle and law down so many samples
I dream of a place where every rapper can be civil
God tell me why I cant be cheerful stay outa my bubble
Im no criminal whats wrong with being damn faithful
Im sick and tired of having to try to fucking hustle
I am my own idol Ill never fall under any damn label
I'll always be stuck in the bottom or the damn middle
Everyone keeps saying that all I do is fucking mumble
So here I am collecting my metal maybe i'll earn a label
I'll never be a rapper I know this dont even have muscles
fuck this I told ya'll that this is me just being playful
I see racial ways as trying to solve a meaningless puzzle
I swear to god this cd is going to earn me more rivals
maybe I should take this rifle and settle several problems
Screw this Ima never have my first single cause rivals

Do I need an atlas just to locate and or find Jesus
Jesus the blankness hides my boldness im not fine
Every parent always wants to get in my business
I could care less about your birthday or mine on Christmas
So lets discuss my business and i promise i wont cuss
How come I can never be the one thats not fearless
im always dateless its pointless to try to empress you
darkness is slowly filling up my fucking ass focus
What do they say about any kind on any justice
Moms got me shook up and always so nervous
When i diss I want to have people nameless
Not to show my cowardliness but not to have problems
Rap takes practice and im already done practicing
Understand rap is my purpose it keeps me restless
Last edited by <VerbalTouch> on Sep 16th, '08, 22:11, edited 7 times in total.
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 6th, '08, 15:30

nice work pal .. keep it up :y:
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Re: Faced In problems + done writing

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Sep 16th, '08, 22:11

thanks finished writing
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