Full Moon

by **The Toy Soldier** » Sep 9th, '08, 00:53

"You get on my nerves....."

oh my fucking god u stupid bitch
all u do all day is act like a snitch
say im childish but u neva grew an inch
ur nothing to me ur useless to this world
shitty as ur words are ur face makes me want to hurl
u say i get on ur nerves cuz im such a perve
like i give a shit bitch at least i aint always getting served
u try to diss me but bitch it makes no difference
cuz in the end ur the one whos got the hurt sentiments
girls may not like me but ur not one withg compliments
cuz all the girls that hate me is half the guys that think ur ugly
cuz in the light of the full moon u show ur true form
ur skin sheds u grow more hair than my pubes can cover better run to ur dorm
ur just another bother to a brother good luck on finding ur lover
next time u want to diss me make sure udont blow ur own cover

Website · by **Solace** » Sep 9th, '08, 01:05

The Toy Soldier wrote:"You get on my nerves....."

oh my fucking god u stupid bitch
all u do all day is act like a snitch
say im childish but u neva grew an inch
ur nothing to me ur useless to this world
shitty as ur words are ur face makes me want to hurl
u say i get on ur nerves cuz im such a perve
like i give a shit bitch at least i aint always getting served
u try to diss me but bitch it makes no difference
cuz in the end ur the one whos got the hurt sentiments
girls may not like me but ur not one withg compliments
cuz all the girls that hate me is half the guys that think ur ugly
cuz in the light of the full moon u show ur true form
ur skin sheds u grow more hair than my pubes can cover better run to ur dorm
ur just another bother to a brother good luck on finding ur lover
next time u want to diss me make sure udont blow ur own cover

It was okay, since this is pretty much expressing anger. I couldnt flow to it. The lines go from really short to really long. There was only one line that i liked:

"say im childish but u neva grew an inch"

Other than that :n:

by **Emadyville** » Sep 9th, '08, 01:23

I agree with what he said ^

by **The Toy Soldier** » Sep 9th, '08, 03:18

im really bored i need a good solid topic to make those :n:

s

s anger has already been done by me

theres happiness
and theres love

hmmm i doubt love is a good one

should i go for happiness next time?

by **Slim Zaddy** » Sep 9th, '08, 11:23

The Toy Soldier wrote:im really bored i need a good solid topic to make those s s anger has already been done by me

theres happiness
and theres love

hmmm i doubt love is a good one

should i go for happiness next time?

this one is good ,, if you feel you can write a better one with happiness ,, then why not go ahead . gd luck :y:

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