Fallin to Our Ends (Unfinished)

[Ka0t1c]

my friends are fallin to their ends
and am i callin them when they're crawlin in?
well i can't win at all-back then i saw a trend
but i'll attempt to halt what bends ourselves to blend again
and help us prevent the faults
i wanna begin with results
but it depends on how i can extend
no doubt we've been around the sin
which condemn our thoughts like walls to pin
just watch the plan, don't let your head do spins
you ought to expand and not pretend....

...to be continued

[Steve Spag]

pretty sick man. nice and simple, felt like it was a poem the way it flowed out soo smoothly. some of the rhymes were kind of basic, but it still sounds good, so not a big problem really, lol. sometimes that's all it takes.

keep it up dude:y:

check out my new peice when you got a chance aswell "keep buildin'"

[enjinn]

dope flow and lyrics...had some good multies too...looking forward to the next part