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Let us unisize.

Postby The Toy Soldier » Sep 10th, '08, 05:56

let us all come together and form the U S of A
listen closely to what i write in this lyrical essay
we can't let some oil nor some planes come and knock us down
because you all gotta remmeber what comes around goes around
now i aint saying we completely had to lose al lof those lives
but they accumulated for the all of the other counrty widow wives
we left in the fog of war those carcuses to crumble and tumble
fumble and stumble to the floor like never before now we suppose to be humbled
yet it seems we haven't made a difference weve only grown anger
to some pube-faced motherfucker that before was a stranger
but you guys must get off osama Binladen he isnt the danger'
that we really need to face right now he aint the lone ranger
now you so mad yet you sit in the manger realize that our lives are being endangered
not by osama,dont expect to be saved by obama
huesens dead shit we werent the ones to hang him
you all even off track on rap wat happened to eminem
today we sing about lolipops not realizing the world just popped
and it seems now our own civilazation has it stopped
no other danger than ourselves can be topped
we are killing oursleves and yet we separate... theres still time
thas why i wrote this rhyme to spit these lines like im commiting a crime
shit haul my ass off to jail you only know that id be right
i come here to prove a point, detest my might and i will fight
i may be rambling even getting off topic
at least i aint slutting on myspace with my top-pic
i aint wanking back here im spanking the president
to stop this hippocracy to all of these residents
but you all point a finger to the same old man
'member not to mess with texas cuz bitch ima fan
not the point here never was u all gotta stop
so do i , i realize that but i want to shine on top to say that you guys gotta stop
blaming others... point a finger and three point back
now call me wack but im Mr. Cintrak cuz ill be back and im here to rap
what we need to do is stop our tirrany to not provoke our demise
we all need to realize that our lives are at jeopardy we need to be a nation

we need to unisize......
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Re: Let us unisize.

Postby enjinn » Sep 10th, '08, 08:08

a deep piece...had a lot of emotion...very well written
each one teaches one
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Re: Let us unisize.

Postby The Toy Soldier » Sep 10th, '08, 14:18

enjinn wrote:a deep piece...had a lot of emotion...very well written

thank you very much
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