inspiration

[The Toy Soldier]

[chorus]

inspiration...it goes through all of us at one moment
you could be starstruck by what you have and never know it
you get addicted to it and work on your flow shit
you get high on it by just getting three hits
you wannabe a rapper, better work on yo' suffix...

when i was younger i didnt know i could flow
with these rhymes and these lines that you gotta know
the story of how i became a amatuer emcee
to spit all these words, soon you will see
that im like alot, a lyrical beast
and all these haikus are my feast
from simple couplets to complex topics
from 9/11 to being in heaven
im luckier than triple 7 on the slots
like beavis and butt-head i confuse them for sluts
cheap as a single coin yet youll be hitting the jackpot
with some shit like that, theres no need to jackoff
youll wanna stay man no reason to take off
you feel like king of the world thats to be expected
like commiting a crime,you will be suspected
to be at the scene, now i don't want to get obscene
so before im notorious, change it to the chor-ee-us

(chorus)

now i don't wanna take long on this song
im just tryna get yall to clean yo bongs
and recognize that rap is back
cuz im on the scene call me Mr. Cintrak
you can call me wack but youll sound like an ass crack
just like a fart no one wants to hear that
cuz the skills you lack, are the ones i pack
wish you were me but you were talknig smack
we could be friends, but i have this knack
to not roll with patty-wacks and lil fags
don't mean to get the nursery rhymes
thats not in my enzymes,it don't flow in my blood
brotha i aint like shaq misisng all these free throws
but im one to talk-I AINT black, shit kudos man
i can't shoot a basket, i can barely swing a racket
but i can make some noise and cause all this racket
make the rukus and get ur girl to suck this
i don't need to front i get carried away sometimes
but all i had to say were in those lines
i hope i get praised and get all these signs
saying: "mr.Cintrak, continue your rhymes!"

[chorus X2]

CINTRAK FOR PRESIDENT!...

[Emadyville]

I really liked the first verse, didn't like the second at all. I thought you had some creative lines in the first one, and the rhymes were pretty good, keep it up.

[The Toy Soldier]

I really liked the first verse, didn't like the second at all. I thought you had some creative lines in the first one, and the rhymes were pretty good, keep it up.

thanks, i honestly didn't like the second one that much either it kinda sidetracked of the main topic

[Urban Punk]

I have to agree with Emadyville, though i liked how to flow was quite consistent throughout both verses keep it up

[The Toy Soldier]

I have to agree with Emadyville, though i liked how to flow was quite consistent throughout both verses keep it up

thank you practice makes perfect right?

[enjinn]

i was feeling this...i like the concept

[The Toy Soldier]

i was feeling this...i like the concept

thnks man means alot

[chand1980]

real good, liked it a lot

[The Toy Soldier]

:y: real good, liked it a lot

this is one of my pieces that are actually good lol

[chand1980]

don't be downin yaself by saying that, im sure you have plenty of other good pieces

[chand1980]

and not only was it good but it was inspiring too

[The Toy Soldier]

and not only was it good but it was inspiring too

my point the whole time