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Postby Emadyville » Sep 17th, '08, 15:05

Was bored so I decided to keystyle since I don't think I've ever done it. Kept it to the subject of TR haha maybe you'll like it.

Here I am as usual on the TR grind,
Talking how raps dead so lets CPR rhymes,
Let’s all add to the topic, post some thoughts,
Wait for Em’s album and then boast it dropped,
Let’s keep talking how 50 fell off after get rich,
Let’s ask for feedback and write another set which,
We all think is the best,
Til 10 TR members tell you to give it a rest,
Let’s post news we already read prior,
Let’s beef on stupid shit and call the other a liar,
Let’s debate about the general election,
And then not vote for this federal selection,
We can all just post random shit all day,
In between classes after trips in the hallway,
Or search the internet for some news to be found,
I’m board, so I figured I’d just write and clown around…
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Bored

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 17th, '08, 17:06

McMaybe wrote:Not bad man, I liked it overall. Only complaint, the flow was a bit stichy, but IDK how you were flowing it so the flow could be perfect.

Word up, lol.
Pretty cool keystyle, had a couple stand-out lines I liked.

Talking how raps dead so lets CPR rhymes


and

Let’s post news we already read prior,
Let’s beef on stupid shit and call the other a liar,
Let’s debate about the general election,
And then not vote for this federal selection,


Those were pretty tight.

Keeeeep it up man :y:
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Re: Bored

Postby Emadyville » Sep 17th, '08, 17:45

Damn thanks. I was just kind of fucking around, Glad you liked it.
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