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Patience Is Key

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Patience Is Key

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 21st, '08, 16:41

from the bottom i blossomed but then i got more problems brought up

and to solve em, i follow one motto, tomorrow erupt

and watch how they also go nuts, ya want a free album, for what?

well Kaotic is tough and patience was key

i pushed the throttle enough to remain maintaining the lead

cuz i've gained me good speed

if you got all the guts and your brain has indeed

suffered from pain and you bleed

then you're half way to facing your dream

i may be happy but i aint safe in the scene

cuz people keep backstabbing

now im attracting the greed

cuz they're lacking to see

their own track to setting them free

quit falling second to me

find your place and your need

stop running your laps

in this race against me

you're making me laugh

quite frankly

cuz it's funny as heck

start taking your seats

cuz you're coming in last
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Patience Is Key

Postby Emadyville » Sep 21st, '08, 16:48

Suffered from pain and you bleed, then you're halfway to finding your dream


Sick line. This one was better, still in poem form when I read it, but it was good. Not a fan of the way it's wrote either, but I liked it, good shit :y:
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Re: Patience Is Key

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 21st, '08, 16:52

thanx for your opinion! :happy:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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