Unmasked

[Ka0t1c]

forgive me, i'm splitting a little bit

cuz my head is spinning, will it ever quit

cuz beginning is a different level unfitting

to what i had been meant for living

so lift me up again and shift me

to a better grip that my tread can get me

back to flip my act cuz then i'll be ready

don't let me slip off track or i am heading

to where my death bed's at, what a sad setting

but my bags are packed because now i'm unhappy

i've fallin off the map and i'm always crabby

cuz somehow i have lost my knack, it's hard to keep steady

my heart, it went pitch black, i'm startin to really

come apart, every crack's enlargened, i'm feeling

as if i were a big outcast in my apartment building

who's picked on last or call me just silly

but i'm sick of masks we all are found here weilding

[Emadyville]

You're best of the three. I like the concept, the rhymes, and the overall message you gave. Didn't know you wrote 3, I kept clicking the topics and they were all your shit lol, either way good work.

[Steve Spag]

Now this peice is actually pretty damn dope. The deepness of the lyrics is crazy, deffinetly feelin' it 'cause I could relate. The flow switched up a few times the way I read it, but other than that, it was prettty sick man.

Keeep it up.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for that input. i'm glad u guys are always checking my pieces out! i've been writing still, i just didnt have the internet for a lil while cuz i had to move